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Band 5+: The chart below describes the production of four different types of fruit in one Australian state between 1995 and 2015, measured in million kilograms.

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The image displays fruit production data in million kilograms for one Australian state across three years—1995, 2005, and 2015—showing oranges at 70, 90, and 80 million kg respectively; apples at 60, 120, and 100 million kg respectively; pears at 160, 130, and 80 million kg respectively; peaches at 40, 55, and 40 million kg respectively.

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The displayed figure depicts data about how production of four different kinds of fruit in one Australian state from 1995 to 2015. The unit measured in million kilograms.

Overall, it is evident that the most noticeable increase was in the rate regarding Pears which clearly surpassed all the other points by a substantial margin. However, Peaches remained the lowst throughout the give period.

According to what is shown, Pears was highest part in 1995 by 160 Miliions Kg, which in 2005 and 2015 had a steep fall to 80 Miliions Kg. However, Peaches started in 2005 around 40 Miliions Kg, Than had a massive increase to 80 Miliions Kg.

In term of in 1995 Apples began 80 Miliions Kg, fruthermore in 2015 witnessed soared to 120 Miliions Kg, which became the highest part in 2015. In addition, in 1995 Oranges commenced nearly 70 Miliions Kg. Afterthat had a marginal growth to 90 Miliions Kg in 2015.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the fruit production data over time, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data presented (e.g., pears and apples figures are misstated, and the trend descriptions are confused). The overall structure is present, but the inclusion of incorrect information detracts from the task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key trends and figures from the visual, and ensure that comparisons are clear and logically presented. Avoid mixing up data points and use precise language to describe changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'According to what is shown' is vague, and the shift from pears to peaches is not smooth. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'fruthermore' and 'Afterthat'). To improve, use a range of linking words and phrases accurately, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic with smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'lowst', 'Miliions', 'give period', 'fruthermore', 'Afterthat') and awkward word choices (e.g., 'the rate regarding Pears', 'highest part'). To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'experienced a significant decline', 'remained relatively stable'), and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid repetition and use synonyms effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Pears was highest part'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'witnessed soared'), and missing articles/prepositions (e.g., 'in term of in 1995'). Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and ensure grammatical accuracy. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and improve punctuation.

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