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Band 5+: The bar chart below provides information about energy generation from fossil fuels, nuclear and renewables in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a stacked horizontal bar chart on per capita electricity generation from fossil fuels, nuclear, and renewables for 2024, detailing percentage compositions for various regions. For Africa, the composition is 75% fossil fuels and 24% renewables. Asia shows 70% fossil fuels and 25% renewables. The World's figures are 59% fossil fuels, 9% nuclear, and 32% renewables. Oceania's generation is 58% fossil fuels and 42% renewables. North America is comprised of 56% fossil fuels, 16% nuclear, and 28% renewables. Europe's mix is 40% fossil fuels, 21% nuclear, and 39% renewables. South America shows 22% fossil fuels and 76% renewables.

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The graph shows sources of electricity generation in the year 2024 by different countries which are represented on the Y-axis while on the X-axis we have the % production of electricity.

Africa has the highest presentation of fossil fuels represented at 75% while south America has the least percentage at 22 %. Asia comes second with a 70 % while North America, Ocenia and the world are almost tallying with a neglible difference of 1 %.

It’s is important to note that the percentage use of nuclear energy for electricity production is very low, with Europe having the highest use at 21 %. Ocenia countries they notably don’t use nuclear source of electricty production.

South America countries they have the highest percentage use of renewables sources of power such as solar, wind,hydropower,bioenergy, geothermal and wave represented at 76%. Africa has the least presentation at 24 % and it is closely followed by Asian countries.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

countries: 4

represented: 3

while: 3

highest: 3

america: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the chart, such as the highest and lowest percentages for fossil fuels and renewables, and notes the low use of nuclear energy. Comparisons are made between regions. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., 'Ocenia' instead of 'Oceania', 'presentation' instead of 'percentage') and omissions (e.g., nuclear data for Africa and Asia is not mentioned). The structure could be improved by grouping related information more logically. Focus on accurate terminology and ensure all key data points are included for a more complete overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The introduction could be more concise, and the body paragraphs would benefit from clearer topic sentences and smoother transitions between ideas. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'overall') to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and repetitive. There are some inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'presentation' instead of 'proportion' or 'share', 'tallying' instead of 'similar'). To improve, use more precise and varied terms related to data description (e.g., 'account for', 'constitute', 'the highest/lowest figure', 'a significant majority'). Avoid informal or vague language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward constructions (e.g., 'It's is important', 'Ocenia countries they notably don't use', 'South America countries they have'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and sentence structure. Varying sentence types (simple, compound, complex) would enhance grammatical range.

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