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Band 6+: The chart below given information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014 and the share of income they produced.

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The image shows data for water consumption and income of Australian agricultural products in 2004. Water cost: Livestock 8%, Vegetable 9%, Fruit 6%, Rice 29%, Dairy 4%, Crop 36%, Sugar 8%. Income: Livestock 25%, Vegetable 30%, Fruit 15%, Rice 3%, Dairy 3%, Crop 20%, Sugar 4%.

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The given pie charts illustrate the amount of water used by the Australian agricultural sector in 2004, broken down by livestock, vegetables, fruit, rice, dairy, crops, and sugar. Overall, the percentage of water used for dairy is equal in both charts, while rice employs a comparatively small amount of water.

As can be seen from the charts, livestock requires just over thirty percent of the water, specifically 36%, yet its income contribution is only one-ninth of the total. Vegetables account for a very small proportion of water use at 5%, while their revenue is as high as one-third. Fruit demands a minor share of 15%, but its income is 5% higher than that.

The amount of water used for rice is very small. Dairy water usage is equal to its income contribution, each accounting for about one-third of the respective total. Crop water usage is 3%, while its income is close to 10%. Sugar water usage is 6%, but its income is 15%.

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water: 8

income: 5

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dairy: 3

while: 3

small: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. Key figures are incorrectly reported (e.g., livestock water at 36% is described as 'just over thirty percent', but the actual is 8%; vegetables water at 5% is actually 9%; fruit water at 15% is actually 6%; rice water is described as 'very small' but is 29%; dairy water and income are both said to be 'about one-third' but are 4% and 3% respectively; crop water at 3% is actually 36%; sugar water at 6% is actually 8%, and income at 15% is actually 4%). The overall comparison is flawed. To improve, carefully read the data and ensure accurate reporting of percentages. Focus on summarizing the main trends and comparisons without introducing errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs. However, the flow of information is sometimes confusing, and the comparisons between water consumption and income are not always logically ordered. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some transitions are abrupt. To improve, organize the data more systematically, perhaps by grouping categories with similar patterns, and use a wider range of linking words and phrases to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and sophistication. There is some repetition of phrases like 'water usage' and 'income'. The report would benefit from using more precise and varied terms, such as 'proportion', 'share', 'revenue', 'contribution', and 'output'. Additionally, some expressions are informal or imprecise (e.g., 'just over thirty percent' for 36% is inaccurate). Aim for more natural and academic lexical choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate with few errors. The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there is some awkward phrasing and unclear comparisons (e.g., 'the percentage of water used for dairy is equal in both charts' is misleading). To improve, work on sentence clarity and ensure that comparisons are correctly expressed. The punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences could be restructured for better readability.

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