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Band 6+: The chart below gives data about the percentages of Internet users, categorized by age groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make com- parisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Percentage of Internet users' categorized by four age groups for three different years. In 1998, the percentages of internet users were: Less than 15 at 2%, 16-30 at 53%, 31-50 at 41%, and 50 or more at 4%. In 1999, the figures were 8% for Less than 15, 45% for 16-30, 35% for 31-50, and 8% for 50 or more. In 2000, the percentages stood at 9% for Less than 15, 44% for 16-30, 37% for 31-50, and 10% for 50 or more.

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The bar chart illustates the percentage of internet users among different age groups from 1998 to 2000.

Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of young people, who were under 15 years old, consistently recorded hit the lowest point during the period. Meanwhile, the figure for people in 16 to 30 years old group always reach a peak between 1998 and 2000.

In 1998, the percentage of users in below 15 years old group stood at 3%, then rising to nearly 10% at the end of the period. Similarly, users was older than or above 50 years old saw a slight increase from roughly 5% to 10% in 2000.

Although the figure for individuals, who were from 16 to 30 years old, marginally decreased to approximately 44%, the percentage of this features always hit the highest point over the period. The percentage of 31 to 50 age group shown a similar downward trend, declining from over 40% in 1988 to almost 38% in the final year.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percentage: 5

years: 5

users: 3

period: 3

group: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and highlighting key trends. It correctly identifies the highest and lowest age groups and notes the general upward trend for younger and older users, as well as the downward trend for the middle groups. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., '3%' instead of '2%' for under 15 in 1998, '1988' instead of '1998') and a few grammatical errors (e.g., 'illustates', 'users was', 'shown a similar'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and proofread for grammatical consistency. Overall, the main features are covered sufficiently.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a paragraph for each age group. However, the flow could be improved by grouping the age groups more effectively and using a wider range of cohesive devices. For example, the transition from the 1998 data to the 2000 data could be smoother, and the final paragraph could be better linked to the previous one.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'consistently', 'hit the lowest point', 'slight increase', 'downward trend'), but there are also some inaccuracies and repetitions. For instance, 'features' is used incorrectly, and 'hit the highest point' is repeated. A wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'peaked', 'remained the highest', 'experienced a decline') would improve the lexical resource. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. Examples include 'illustates' (spelling), 'users was older' (subject-verb agreement), 'shown' (should be 'showed'), and 'this features' (agreement). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the errors detract from the overall accuracy. To improve, the writer should proofread for subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and article usage.

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