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Band 5+: The chart below gives information about how many North America citizens of various age groups who frequently go to the gym from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image shows a line graph with data from 1990, 1994, 1998, 2002, 2006, and 2010 for four age groups: 18-23, 24-33, 34-43, and 44-53. In 1990, 18-23 was at 12%, 24-33 was at 17%, 34-43 was at 0%, 44-53 was at 0%. In 1994, 18-23 was at 17%, 24-33 was at 23%, 34-43 was at 6%, 44-53 was at 6%. In 1998, 18-23 was at 15%, 24-33 was at 20%, 34-43 was at 7%, 44-53 was at 6%. In 2002, 18-23 was at 17%, 24-33 was at 21%, 34-43 was at 8%, 44-53 was at 7%. In 2006, 18-23 was at 22%, 24-33 was at 24%, 34-43 was at 8%, 44-53 was at 7%. In 2010, 18-23 was at 18%, 24-33 was at 25%, 34-43 was at 9%, 44-53 was at 7%.

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The line chart demonstrates the percentage of gym going individuals of different ages since 1990 to 2010.

From the birds eye, age catagories from 18-23, 24-33 and 44-53 ages people’s proportion experienced overall increase over the period, while over 34 to below 43 showed some fluctuation though, their overall staus remained stable over the same period.

To commence with, exercise was always popular to the young-aged individuals. It dramatically increased to around 24% from 16% in 1994, before declined to 20% in 1998, and then it again rose steadily and reached its peak to approximately 25.5% in the end.In contrast , 34 to 43 aged people gym going percentage remained stable from 1990 to 1994, then go up steadily to close to 10%, before neglible decline.Ultimately it continued it increasing trend in the end.

Most intersting fluctuation happend in the aged of 18-23. It jump dramatically to around 20%, before go down to approxmately 15% in 1998.Finally, after some ups and down it reched to 10% in 2010. Other ages people exhibited some swing but increased to around 7% from 5% throught the period.

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The report addresses the task requirements and provides a reasonable overview of the data, highlighting key trends and making some comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the 18-23 age group did not reach 25.5% and did not end at 10% in 2010. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid minor inaccuracies. Also, the writing could be more concise and fluent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction is adequate, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the main points. The writing would benefit from more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, using transition words like 'However,' 'Moreover,' or 'In addition' can improve the flow. Paragraphing could be improved by focusing each paragraph on a single, clear aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. There is some attempt to use appropriate vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., 'increased,' 'declined,' 'stable'), but the execution is not always accurate or natural. To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing data and trends, and pay attention to using collocations correctly. For example, instead of 'gym going individuals,' consider 'gym attendees' or 'people who go to the gym.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and readability. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Punctuation errors are also present. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses and ensure they are consistent throughout the report. Proofreading carefully for errors before submitting your work is essential.

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