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Band 4+: The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan.

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The image is a bar graph depicting the percentage of people using multiple social networking sites in Canada for the years 2014 and 2015. The categories represented are No sites, One site, Two sites, Three sites, Four sites, and Five sites. In 2014, the percentages were 22% for No sites, 36% for One site, 28% for Two sites, 12% for Three sites, 5% for Four sites, and 8% for Five sites. In 2015, the percentages changed to 21% for No sites, 36% for One site, 23% for Two sites, 16% for Three sites, 8% for Four sites, and 4% for Five sites.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who used various types of social networking sites in canada in 2014 and 1015.

It is clear that, most of the people who used one site social networking in canada. by the contrast, the lowest percentage of people who used five social site networking in canada.

Looking at the bar chart for more detail, the people of canada who used the highest portion of social networing one site which was at , 36% in canada in 2014. Similarly, in 2014 in canadian people used two sites, three sites, four sites, and also five sites which was following a decreasing trend at, 23% to 2%.

On the other hand, the people of canadian who utilized the lowest percentage of social networking on five sites which was at, 2% in canada in 2014. the percentage of social networking people in canada who used no sites at, 22% in 2015. Similarly, the people of canadian who utilized one side which was following a increasing trend at, 28% in 2015. Similarly, two side , theree sides, four sites, five sites following a redeucing trend at, 24% to 4% in canada in 2015.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sites: 9

people: 8

canada: 7

social: 6

networking: 5

percentage: 4

which: 4

similarly: 3

canadian: 3

following: 3

trend: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the data for both years, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies. For example, the figures for 2014 and 2015 are often confused or incorrectly stated (e.g., '23% to 2%' for 2014, '22% in 2015' for no sites, and '28% in 2015' for one site). The overall trend is not clearly summarized, and comparisons between the two years are not effectively made. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features, such as the most common number of sites used (one site) and the changes between 2014 and 2015 (e.g., increases in three and four sites, decreases in two and five sites). Ensure data is correctly attributed to the correct year and avoid vague or contradictory statements. Organize the response with a clear overview and logically grouped details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and a body, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The overall message is difficult to follow in places due to inconsistent data presentation and a lack of clear paragraphing. To improve, organize the information into clear paragraphs, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'overall') more effectively, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Also, avoid repeating the same information and ensure that comparisons between the two years are clearly signposted.

Lexical Resource

The range of vocabulary is limited, and there are several errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'networing', 'redeucing', 'utilized', 'theree'). Some phrases are awkward or repetitive (e.g., 'the people of canadian', 'which was at'). To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and comparisons (e.g., 'accounted for', 'experienced a decline', 'remained stable'), and use precise terms like 'percentage' and 'category'. Proofread to eliminate spelling errors and ensure that words are used accurately and naturally. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement issues, and missing articles. Sentence structures are often repetitive and lack variety. For example, 'the people of canada who used the highest portion...' is awkward and grammatically incorrect. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement. Pay close attention to articles ('a', 'an', 'the') and prepositions. Review the report for punctuation errors, such as missing commas and incorrect capitalization (e.g., 'canada' should be 'Canada').

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