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Band 5+: The chart below show the percentage of male and females workers in country A and country B

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The image shows pie charts detailing the distribution of male and female workers across three sectors—industry, agriculture, and services—in two countries, A and B. For male workers in Country A: industry 10%, agriculture 80%, services 10%; female workers: industry 5%, agriculture 90%, services 5%. In Country B, male workers: industry 30%, agriculture 70%, services 0%, while female workers: industry 11%, agriculture 70%, services 19%.

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Presented pie charts demonstrate statistics of labor divided by sex in two countries.

At first glance, it is noticeable that in country A agriculture field is more valued, rather than in country B. Consequently, in latter country more workers remain in services and industry areas.

As it can be seen, among male workers of first country, approximately one third of total is employed in agriculture; whereas, in the second country the same makes up only 2 percent. The similar trend can be noticed among female workers. In former country a quarter of women employees take place in the agriculture field, compared to country B, only 1% of females has a job there.

Furthermore, second country’s employees are more concentrated in services and industry areas. In country B 3/4 of whole chart make up workers from the services field, whereas the left percentage is in the industry. Compared to country A

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The data presented for Country A and B is largely incorrect (e.g., stating agriculture is about one third in Country A when it is 80% for males and 90% for females, and claiming services make up 3/4 in Country B when it is 0% for males and 19% for females). The report also fails to provide a clear overview of the main trends and omits key details for some sectors. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the percentages for each sector and gender, and ensure a clear summary of the main features is included.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'latter country', 'first country', 'former country') and an incomplete final sentence. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent, and some transitions are abrupt. To improve, ensure each pronoun clearly refers to its antecedent, complete all sentences, and use a range of linking words to guide the reader smoothly through the comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variety (e.g., 'demonstrate', 'employed', 'concentrated'), but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'agriculture field is more valued', 'take place in the agriculture field', '3/4 of whole chart'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the agricultural sector', 'account for', 'the majority of workers') and avoid informal or vague expressions. A wider range of topic-specific vocabulary would also strengthen the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('the same makes up' should be 'the same makes up' but the subject is unclear), incorrect use of articles, and incomplete sentences. There is also limited variety in sentence structures. To improve, focus on writing complete sentences, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and using a mix of simple and complex structures with accurate punctuation. Proofreading for these errors is essential.

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