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The image displays two pie charts representing energy production in France for the years 1995 and 2005; 1995 chart: Gas 29.63%, Petro 29.27%, Nuclear 6.40%, Other 4.90%, Coal 29.80%; 2005 chart: Gas 30.31%, Petro 19.55%, Nuclear 10.10%, Other 9.10%, Coal 30.93%.

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The chart show two cycle shows different kinds of energy by precentage in Frence in 1995 and 2005

Firstly France has gas petro nuclear coal and other in 1995 France has all of gas and coal and petro almost same amount by 29% and small intrest in nuclear by 6,40% and other 4,90 but in the other hand in 2005 after 10 years France got more intrest in gas and coal it got increased to 30,31% and 30,93% and even nuclear and other it reached 10,10% and 9,10 but about petero it got deacreased it become 19,55%

In conclusion france transfer there intentions to nuclear coal and gas energy to keep up with economic world and even in army evolution

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The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization, accuracy, and language. The description of the data is somewhat general and lacks specific comparisons. The conclusion introduces an idea (economic world and army evolution) that is not supported by the data. To improve, focus on providing more precise data comparisons, organizing the information more clearly (e.g., by grouping similar trends), and ensuring the conclusion directly relates to the data presented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between the two pie charts. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between sentences and ideas are abrupt. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, group similar information together, and use transition words to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of incorrect word choice ('cycle shows' instead of 'pie charts,' 'intrest' instead of 'interest,' 'petero' instead of 'petro,' 'deacreased' instead of 'decreased,' 'transfer there intentions' instead of 'shifted its focus'). To enhance lexical resource, use a wider range of vocabulary related to energy production and data comparison. Focus on using synonyms and more precise terms to describe trends and changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Practice writing complex sentences to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures.

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