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Band 4+: The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

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The image depicts a bar chart showing global mobile phone sales by brand from 2009 to 2013. Samsung sold around 200 million units in 2009, over 300 million in 2011, and nearly 450 million in 2013. Apple sold approximately 100 million in 2009, over 150 million in 2011, and almost 250 million in 2013. Nokia sold close to 450 million in 2009, around 400 million in 2011, and just over 200 million in 2013. LG sold about 100 million in 2009, less than 100 million in 2011, and just under 50 million in 2013. ZTE sold nearly 50 million in 2009, around 70 million in 2011, and just over 50 million in 2013.

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The bar chart depicts the worldwide sales of top five Mobile phone brand in the year of 2009 to 2013. The abscissa depicts the sales and ordinate describes the brands.Oveall the LZTEsales is lower in all the years whikle compare to other brands.

It can be clearly seen that the sales of Samsung and Apple has exponentially rises in sales In contrast the sales of Lg and Nokia is gradually decline in sales.

Although the sales of the Samsung in the year of 2009 with sales of 220 rose to approximately 320 in the year of 2011 and shot up to 450 in 2013.But,Nokia has already achieved this in year 2009. Also , the Apple sale raises less in number but in a exponential manner On the other hand the sales of LG is peeked at 2009 with the sales of approximately 120 but it gradually declined.

To put in a nutshell, The sales of Samsung is higher than any other brands in the latest trend because of their latest technology and ZTE is used by least number of people.

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