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Band 5+: The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

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The image depicts a bar chart showing global mobile phone sales by brand from 2009 to 2013. Samsung sold around 200 million units in 2009, over 300 million in 2011, and nearly 450 million in 2013. Apple sold approximately 100 million in 2009, over 150 million in 2011, and almost 250 million in 2013. Nokia sold close to 450 million in 2009, around 400 million in 2011, and just over 200 million in 2013. LG sold about 100 million in 2009, less than 100 million in 2011, and just under 50 million in 2013. ZTE sold nearly 50 million in 2009, around 70 million in 2011, and just over 50 million in 2013.

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The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of global sales divided by top 5 selfphones brands during the year 2009 and 2013.

Overall, two brands , such as Samsung and Nokia, show the highest sales level throughout the period, while the level of sales for the rest of brands are relatively small, it means that they could face some challenges in competing with Nokia and Samsung.

The figures represented by Samsung had a stable growth from around 230 in 2009 to exactly 450 in 2013. As for the apple brand, the rate started from approximately 20 in 2009, but was increased by around 90 in 2011 and reached a peak to 150 in 2013. The Nokia had remarkable amount of sales accounted around 440 in 2009, but this rate felt over time to 250 in 2013.

The LG brand sales rate was above 100 in 2009, but over the period it decreased to below 100 in 2013. It is interesting to note, that the ZTE figures were stable during the whole period.

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6.5

The main features of the global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 are adequately summarized. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data representation, such as incorrect sales figures for some years and brands.

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The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear overall structure. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and linking ideas, which slightly affect the flow of the report.

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There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and repetitions are present. More precise and varied word choices could enhance the lexical resource.

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A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings throughout the report. More attention to grammar and sentence construction is needed for improvement.

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