Band 5+: The chart below shows the amount of coffee exported by Brazil and Colombia between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The report effectively summarizes the main features of the chart, highlighting the overall trend for Brazil (increase) and Colombia (fluctuation with a slight decline). It includes relevant data for all years and makes appropriate comparisons between the two countries. There are minor inaccuracies (e.g., '50 thousand tonnes' for Colombia in 1995, '60 tonnes' instead of '60 thousand tonnes' in 2000, and '46 thousand tonnes' for 2005) and some grammatical issues (e.g., 'among 1995 and 2010' should be 'between 1995 and 2010', 'brazil' should be capitalized, and 'noticeable decrease' could be phrased more clearly). However, these do not detract from the overall clarity and task achievement. To improve, ensure precise data and consistent units, and refine language for a more formal tone. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, there are some lapses in cohesion, such as the use of 'among' instead of 'between' and the phrase 'noticeable decrease its exports' which is awkward. The paragraphing is acceptable, but the flow could be improved by using more linking words and ensuring that comparisons are clearly signaled. The overview is present but could be more precise in describing the trends.

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'quantities', 'exported'). However, there are some inaccuracies and limited range, such as 'spent more tons' (should be 'exported more'), 'the Colombia' (unnecessary article), and 'was fluctuated' (incorrect verb form). The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'dipped') and more sophisticated phrasing.

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'among 1995 and 2010' (should be 'between'), 'brazil increased' (missing capital letter), 'noticeable decrease its exports' (missing preposition and incorrect word form), and 'By 2000 ,the figures' (spacing and comma issues). Punctuation is inconsistent, with missing spaces after commas. To improve, the writer should focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and consistent punctuation.