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Band 4+: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph representing the changing rates of crime, specifically burglary, car theft, and robbery (theft from the person), in the inner city from 2003-2012. There are three lines on the graph: a solid line for burglary, a dashed line for car theft, and a dotted line for robbery. The y-axis represents the number of incidences, ranging from 0 to 4000, and the x-axis represents the years from 2003 to 2012. In 2003, burglary had the highest incidence at around 3400, followed by car theft at 2800, and robbery at 1000. By 2012, burglary had decreased to around 2000, car theft to 1600, and robbery to 800. Overall, the graph shows a decrease in all three types of crime over the ten-year period.

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The line graph illustrates the changes that place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre between 2003-2012.

Overall, there are three line has different tend, firstly, the tend of burglary rates was decrease with influely, and Secondly, the car theft rates of crime in the inner city was decline at first then they change back to the original point number. Eventually, the robbery rates of crime in the inner city was not change any more during 2003 to 2008. finally, they change to around original point number.

In 2003, The burglary rates of crime in the inner city was about 3400 number of incidents. The highest point of burglary was in 2004 approximately 3800 number of incidents. then they decrease quickly in 2005 to 2012, they change the shape with a line with influely. Finally, burglary rates of crime in the inner city was about 1400 number of incidents.

Beside that, the car theft and robbery has the same tend about first year to last year not change any more. But the car theft rates of crime in the inner city has a decline in 2005 to 2006, and the lestest point was about 2000 number of incidents in 2006. While the robbery was changed to the lestest point in 2008 approximately 500. After they change back to original point, car theft rates of crime in the inner city was about 2700 number of incidents. And robbery rates of crime in the inner city was about 800 number of incidents.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

crime: 8

rates: 8

inner: 7

number: 7

change: 6

point: 6

about: 6

incidents: 5

burglary: 4

theft: 4

robbery: 4

original: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main trends and providing some data, but it contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend of decrease is mentioned, but the description of individual crime trends is confusing and sometimes incorrect (e.g., stating car theft and robbery have the same trend, and that they return to original points). Key data points are misreported (e.g., final burglary figure is given as 1400 instead of around 2000). The report lacks clear comparisons and a well-structured overview. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main features, making clear comparisons, and ensuring data is correctly reported. Organize the response logically with a clear overview and body paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for each crime type, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The overview is vague and does not effectively summarise the main trends. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Beside that' instead of 'In addition'). Paragraphing is present but could be more logically organised, with clearer topic sentences and smoother connections between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary range is limited and repetitive, with frequent misuse of words (e.g., 'tend' instead of 'trend', 'influely' instead of 'fluctuated', 'lestest' instead of 'lowest'). There is some attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'rates of crime', 'number of incidents'), but the language lacks precision and sophistication. The report would benefit from using a wider variety of accurate terms related to trends (e.g., 'decline', 'peak', 'fluctuate', 'remain stable') and more precise data descriptions. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('there are three line has'), incorrect verb forms ('was decrease', 'was decline'), and missing articles/prepositions. Sentence structures are often repetitive and lack complexity. Punctuation is inconsistent, with missing commas and incorrect capitalisation. While some simple sentences are correct, the overall accuracy is low, and the errors frequently impede clarity. To improve, the writer should focus on using a variety of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical correctness.

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