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Band 7+: The chart below shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular resort in Canada in three individual years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar graph illustrating snow depths in cm at a Canadian ski resort over three years: November depths for Year One, Year Two, Year Three are approximately 50cm, 100cm, 70cm respectively; December shows depths of roughly 100cm, 200cm, 140cm; January records around 140cm, 250cm, 270cm; February shows 450cm, 480cm, 420cm; March indicates depths of 480cm, 480cm, 460cm; April reveals around 300cm, 490cm, 470cm.

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The chart illustrates the average snow depth, measured in centimeters, at a particular resort in Canada during three separate years.

Overall, snow depth increased significantly over time and reached its peak during the final months of winter. In addition, year one and year two generally recorded greater snow depth than year three.

In November, the snow depth was relatively low in all three years, at around 100 cm. Standing at 150 cm, the figure for snow depth in year three was slightly higher than that of year one (130 cm) and more than twice as high as that of year two (75 cm) in December. January exhibits a similar profile: year three was the highest at 170 cm, with year two at 110 cm and year one at about 140 cm.

The snow depth saw a slight downward trend in February and March. During this period, year one experienced a sharp rise to around 450 cm, while year two recorded slightly lower figures of roughly 400 cm. In contrast, year three remained lower at about 350 cm in both months. In April, year two reached a peak of 460 cm, while year three was the lowest at 350 cm.

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7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

depth: 6

three: 6

during: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies in data reporting that contradict the provided visual description. While the structure is appropriate and includes an overview, the specific figures cited for almost every month do not align with the trends described in the visual data (for example, stating November was 100cm when it was much lower, or misrepresenting the relationship between the years in the later months). To improve, ensure that the data extracted from the chart is transcribed accurately and that comparisons between the years are based on the correct values. Focus on maintaining consistency between your descriptions and the actual data points shown.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized, with a clear introduction, a logical overview, and body paragraphs that group information effectively. The use of cohesive devices such as 'In addition', 'In contrast', and 'During this period' helps the flow of information. To reach a higher band, ensure that the transitions between comparing different years and different months are even more seamless to avoid a slightly repetitive sentence structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, with good use of terms like 'relatively low', 'exhibits a similar profile', and 'sharp rise'. The student demonstrates a good ability to use comparative language. To improve, the writer could incorporate more sophisticated synonyms for 'increase' or 'decrease' and use more varied ways to describe the magnitude of changes to demonstrate full lexical flexibility. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical control is excellent. The report uses a wide range of structures, including complex sentences and various tense applications, with high accuracy. Punctuation is used correctly throughout, and there are no noticeable errors that impede communication. The writing is natural and professional.

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