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Band 5+: The chart below shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular resort in Canada in three individual years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar graph illustrating snow depths in cm at a Canadian ski resort over three years: November depths for Year One, Year Two, Year Three are approximately 50cm, 100cm, 70cm respectively; December shows depths of roughly 100cm, 200cm, 140cm; January records around 140cm, 250cm, 270cm; February shows 450cm, 480cm, 420cm; March indicates depths of 480cm, 480cm, 460cm; April reveals around 300cm, 490cm, 470cm.

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The line chart demonstrates the thickness of snow in a resort in Canada over a three year, measured by centimet (cm)

Overall, it is clear that both three years namely Year 1, Year 2 and Year 3 experience an drammatic upward trend throughout this timeframe. The figure for Year 2 began with lowest point in November and reached highest point in the end, the opposite pattern can seen in Year three’ figure during the period.

Reagarding with the depth of snow in Year 1, this figure experienced a slightly increase in the first 3 months from approximately 100 cm to 150 cm before significant increasing throughout next 2 month about 300 cm and minimal declined to just over 400 cm in the end of this timeframe . The pattern can be seen in the data for Year two, began at below 100 cm before grew to 400 cm in February and reached a peak at 480 cm in the end.

The last is the thickness of snow in year three, began with over 100 cm and reached a highest point in all three untill exceeded by Year 1 and year 2 in February. And then, it witnessed slightly declined in the end of the period

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

three: 4

figure: 3

began: 3

point: 3

reached: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the data but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The task type is misidentified as a line chart instead of a bar graph. The overview is somewhat unclear and contains errors (e.g., Year 2 starting lowest and ending highest is not accurate). The description of trends is generally present but lacks precision and includes some irrelevant or incorrect details. To improve, focus on accurately identifying the chart type, providing a clear overview of main trends, and selecting key data points with correct values. Avoid overgeneralizing and ensure comparisons are relevant and accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and compare the three years, but the organization is somewhat unclear. Paragraphing could be improved to separate the description of each year more distinctly. Use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the flow less smooth. Consider using clearer topic sentences and linking words to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'figure', 'depth', 'increased'). There are some errors in word choice and form (e.g., 'drammatic', 'centimet', 'Reagarding'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'surge', 'plummet', 'fluctuate') and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('both three years... experience'), incorrect verb forms ('began with lowest point'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often simple or incorrectly formed. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (complex, compound) and review basic grammar rules such as tense consistency and article usage.

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