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Band 5+: The chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive in three regions of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart titled "Causes of Worldwide Land Degradation," showing the percentage of degraded land by cause for North America, Europe, and Oceania. For the cause of Over-grazing, the percentages are: North America 1.5%, Europe 5.5%, and Oceania 11.3%. For Deforestation, North America is 0.2%, Europe is 9.8%, and Oceania is 1.7%. For Over-cultivation, North America is 3.3% and Europe is 7.7%. For the "Other" cause category, North America is 0.2% and Europe is 7.1%. Oceania has no recorded percentage for Over-cultivation or Other.

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The given bar chart depicts the defferent bettwen the reasons of why the agricultural land becomes less productive in North America, Europe, and Oceania.

Overall, in North America, the highest percentage of degraded land caused by over-cultivation. In Europe, the highest one caused by over-grazing. Furthermore, in Oceania, the highest percentage caused by over-grazing.

On the first hand, The percentage of degraded land caused by over-grazing is hight in Oceania with about more than 10%, and low in North America in about less than 2%. However, deforestation in Eurrope is much more than Oceania and North america.

On the other hand, over-cultivation lead to less productive in Europe with about 8%, in North America is about 3.5%. However, it has no empact on Oceania. For other causes have a lot empact on Europe specificaly in about 7%. But, they have no big empact on the other two regions; North America, and Oceania.

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north: 6

america: 5

oceania: 5

about: 5

europe: 4

caused: 4

highest: 3

percentage: 3

other: 3

empact: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main causes of land degradation in the three regions and makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For example, it states that over-grazing is the highest cause in Europe, but the data shows deforestation is higher. It also omits the 'Other' category for Oceania and misrepresents some figures. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, more precise data, and a more formal tone. Additionally, there are spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction, an overall statement, and paragraphs for specific causes. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'the highest one caused by over-grazing' and 'it has no empact on Oceania'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'On the first hand' instead of 'On the one hand'). Paragraphing is present but could be more logically organized to group related information and comparisons more effectively. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the topic (e.g., 'degraded land', 'over-grazing', 'deforestation', 'over-cultivation'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'defferent', 'bettwen', 'hight', 'empact', 'Eurrope') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'reasons of why', 'a lot empact'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'caused by' and 'percentage'. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and comparisons (e.g., 'accounted for', 'contributed to', 'significantly higher', 'negligible') and proofread for spelling. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('over-cultivation lead to'), incorrect use of articles ('the highest percentage caused by over-grazing' should be 'the highest percentage is caused by over-grazing'), and awkward phrasing ('For other causes have a lot empact on Europe'). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas). To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately. Proofreading for common errors would significantly enhance accuracy.

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