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Band 5+: The chart below shows the market share for different Internet browsers.

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The image shows a horizontal bar chart displaying data for 2014 Q1, with a top horizontal axis featuring marks at 0.00%, 10.00%, 20.00%, 30.00%, and 40.00%. The items listed and their exact values are: Chrome: 46.40%, Internet Explorer: 24.96%, Firefox: 20.54%, Safari: 5.04%, Opera: 1.29%, and Netscape Navigator: 0.02%.

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The graph illustrates the proportion of market share in four diverse websites (Chrome, Internet Explorer, Firefox, Safari and Opera).

Overall, Chrome has the highest proportion of market share in the graph, while Opera has the lowest level of market share.

Firstly, the browser Chrome takes first place and it receives 46.40% proportion of the market. Internet Explorer ranks after the website Chrome and it has 24.96% market percentage. These two browsers rank at the top stage.

The website called Firefox receives includes 24.54% market proportion and it stays at the third place. However, Safari website involves 5.04% of the market and it ranked at the 4th place. Finally, the website which stays at the lowest rank is Opera which includes 1.29% marked proportion which is very low.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

market: 7

proportion: 5

website: 4

chrome: 3

place: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the market share of the internet browsers, and it correctly identifies the highest and lowest values. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions 'four diverse websites' but lists five browsers, and it incorrectly states Firefox's market share as 24.54% instead of 20.54%. Additionally, the report omits the data for Netscape Navigator, which is part of the chart. The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise and varied. To improve, ensure all data points are included and accurately reported, and avoid vague terms like 'diverse websites' when referring to browsers. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized and easy to follow, with a clear overall statement and a sequential description of the data. However, the paragraphing could be improved: the first paragraph introduces the chart but mentions 'four diverse websites' while listing five, which is a minor inconsistency. The second paragraph groups the top two browsers, and the third covers the rest, which is effective. To enhance coherence, consider using a wider range of linking devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') and ensure that the introduction accurately reflects the number of categories.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'proportion of market share'). However, there is some repetition and imprecise word choices, such as 'diverse websites' (should be 'browsers'), 'receives includes' (redundant), and 'marked proportion' (unclear). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'accounts for', 'constitutes', 'ranks third') and avoid informal or awkward phrases. The range of vocabulary is sufficient but not sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures and is largely accurate, with only minor errors. For example, 'Firefox receives includes' is a grammatical mistake (should be 'receives' or 'includes'), and 'it ranked at the 4th place' should be 'it ranks in fourth place' or 'it is ranked fourth'. The use of commas and sentence structures is generally correct. To achieve a higher score, ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid minor slips. Overall, the grammar is controlled and does not impede understanding.

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