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Band 4+: The chart below shows the number of applicants from four different countries in a UK university between 1999 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant applying to a European university.

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The image features a bar chart with numerical data: in 1999, European Nations 30,000, Middle East 3,000, Far East 20,000; in 2000, European Nations 30,000, Middle East 25,000, Far East 18,000, Africa 2,000; in 2001, European Nations 15,000, Middle East 30,000, Far East 15,000, Africa 2,000; in 2002, European Nations 10,000, Middle East 24,000, Far East 12,000, Africa 5,000; in 2003, European Nations 27,000, Middle East 23,000, Far East 30,000, Africa 4,000.

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According to the chart the data denotes the number of applicants from four different countries like( European nations, Middle East, Far Fast and Affrica) in a Uk University between 1999 and 2003.

From 1999 to 2003 the number of students from European nations gradually decreases from 30,000 to 10000 in UK University.

In Middle East applicant dramatical increases from 10,000 to 15,000 between 1999 to 2001.In 2002 the number of people slight fall 12,000 and sudently rose 20,000 applicant in 2003.

In addition, the propotion of applicants continuous growth from 15000 to 30,000 in Far East.In Africa the number of applicants less than 5000 1n 1999 and apporximetly 6000 student on 2003

In conclusion, the highest number of applicants 30,000 from Far East in a Uk University on 2003. the lowest applicant 6000 from Africa in a UK university in same year.

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

number: 5

applicants: 4

university: 3

30000: 3

applicant: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some trends but lacks overall coherence and accuracy in data representation. The description of the Middle East data is confusing and inaccurate. The report also contains grammatical errors and imprecise language. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and organizing the information into a clear and coherent structure. Also, ensure correct grammar and spelling. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different ideas or time periods. Consider organizing the report by region or by comparing trends across regions to improve coherence. Using transition words and phrases can also help to connect ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of incorrect word usage ('propotion' instead of 'proportion', 'Affrica' instead of 'Africa'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is little evidence of sophisticated control of lexical features. To improve, focus on using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the trends and data presented in the chart. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation errors. Sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. There are also issues with spelling ('Fast' instead of 'East', 'dramatical' instead of 'dramatically', 'sudently' instead of 'suddenly', 'apporximetly' instead of 'approximately'). To improve, focus on practicing grammar rules and sentence structure. Proofread carefully for errors in spelling and punctuation. Try to use a wider range of sentence structures to add complexity and variety to your writing.

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