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Band 7+: The chart below shows the number of artisans worldwide between 1950, 2000, and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents data on artisans around the world across three years: 1950, 2000, and 2050, divided into seven categories. Painting shows 1950 with 30 million, 2000 with 25 million, and 2050 with 40 million. Ceramics indicates 1950 with 23 million, 2000 with 20 million, and 2050 with 30 million. Film making records 15 million in 1950, 27 million in 2000, and 35 million in 2050. Sculpting exhibits 17 million, 22 million, and 28 million for 1950, 2000, and 2050 respectively. Photography marks 10 million in 1950, 12 million in 2000, and 26 million in 2050. Performing Arts highlights 25 million in 1950, 30 million in 2000, and 38 million in 2050. Lastly, Poetry notes 20 million in 1950, 10 million in 2000, and 5 million in 2050.

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The bar chart compares the number of artisans, measured in millions, working in seven different artistic fields in 1950 and 2000, with projections for 2050.

Overall, painting and poetry had the highest numbers of artisans in 1950, whereas film making and performing arts are expected to become the most popular fields by 2050. While most categories experienced a decline, photography, film making and performing arts are projected to increase.

In 1950, painting and poetry both employed 35 million artisans, followed by sculpting and performing arts at 30 million each. Ceramics and film making accounted for approximately 26 and 22 million respectively, while photography had the lowest figure, at only 8 million. By 2000, painting, sculpting and poetry had fallen to 20, 10 and 16 million respectively, while film making and performing arts increased to 30 and 35 million.

By 2050, film making and performing arts are predicted to reach 40 million each. Photography is also expected to rise considerably to 30 million. In contrast, sculpting is projected to fall to just 5 million, while poetry is expected to decline to 10 million.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 9

making: 5

performing: 5

poetry: 4

while: 4

artisans: 3

painting: 3

expected: 3

photography: 3

sculpting: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making comparisons across the three time periods. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., painting and poetry in 1950, sculpting and performing arts in 1950, ceramics and film making in 1950, photography in 1950, and the 2000 figures for painting, sculpting, poetry, film making, and performing arts). These inaccuracies detract from the overall accuracy of the response. To improve, ensure that all figures are correctly reported from the visual information. Additionally, the report could be more balanced by including data for all categories in each time period, as some categories (e.g., ceramics) are omitted in the later description. Overall, the structure is clear and the main trends are identified, but the data errors need to be corrected to achieve a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively highlights key trends. The body paragraphs are logically divided by time periods, and the use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'In contrast', 'while') is appropriate. However, there is a minor issue: the overview states that 'most categories experienced a decline,' but the data shows that several categories increased from 1950 to 2000 and are projected to increase further. This slight inconsistency in the overview could affect the clarity of the message. To improve, ensure that the overview accurately reflects the main trends without overgeneralizing.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task. Words like 'projected', 'accounted for', 'expected to rise considerably', and 'predicted to fall' are used effectively. There is also good use of synonyms to avoid repetition (e.g., 'employed', 'accounted for', 'had the highest numbers'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied phrasing. For example, instead of 'both employed 35 million artisans,' you could say 'both stood at 35 million' or 'both accounted for 35 million artisans.' Additionally, the phrase 'most categories experienced a decline' is not entirely accurate, so consider using more precise language to describe the trends. Overall, the lexical resource is strong but could be enhanced with more precise and varied expressions. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates excellent grammatical control. The sentences are varied in structure, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses (e.g., 'While most categories experienced a decline, photography, film making and performing arts are projected to increase.') and appropriate use of passive voice (e.g., 'is also expected to rise'). Punctuation is used correctly throughout, and there are no noticeable grammar errors. The report is accurate and fluent, meeting the highest standards for grammatical range and accuracy.

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