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Band 4+: The chart below shows the number three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2002.

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The image shows the number of museum visitors in three categories—adult visitors, visitors aged under 15, and special exhibition visitors—over the years 1997, 2002, 2007, and 2012. In 1997, adult visitors numbered approximately 250,000, visitors aged under 15 numbered around 150,000, and special exhibition visitors were roughly 100,000. In 2002, adult visitors rose to about 300,000, visitors aged under 15 remained consistent around 150,000, and special exhibition visitors slightly increased to nearly 120,000. In 2007, adult visitors peaked at nearly 420,000, visitors aged under 15 held steady at 150,000, and special exhibition visitors reached around 110,000. By 2012, adult visitors were around 400,000, visitors aged under 15 stayed at approximately 150,000, and special exhibition visitors numbered close to 120,000.

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The line graph illustrates about museum visitor type’s in 15 years. Overall, there are divided into three groups, adult, below 15 age, and the special guest and the trend of each group have a differences.

For the adult, they had a stagnant amount in the first of five years and be the top visitor in the tenth year but followed by the decreasing. It was different with the visitor under 15 year in which they had a drop amount every time in those years. However this condition was totally contrast with the special exhibition guest, even it had little counted but the amount was continue to rise.

The gap of total amount in every guest type’s is also different. Adult more likely to visit the exhibition with the top can reach in 400000 visitor in 2017 or a decade after the data collected. Nevertheleas, the guest under 15 was not huge as many as the adult, the data in 2007 was started as 125000 and falling out until 75000 in 2012. Furthermore, the special guest was very limited with data is below 50000.

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guest: 5

visitor: 4

adult: 4

amount: 4

years: 3

special: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the three visitor types and their trends, but it contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. Key data points are misrepresented (e.g., stating under-15 visitors dropped when they remained steady, and mentioning 2017 which is outside the given timeframe). The overview is unclear and the report lacks a clear structure. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends from the visual description, avoid introducing incorrect data or years, and organize the report with a clear overview followed by specific details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and then details, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward transitions. The paragraphing is present but not skillfully managed, and the message is not always easy to follow. To improve, focus on creating a clear structure: a brief introduction, an overall trend paragraph, and then a paragraph detailing each category or time period. Use clear referencing (e.g., 'this group,' 'the former') and avoid jumping between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used inaccurately (e.g., 'stagnant amount,' 'drop amount,' 'totally contrast'). There is some attempt at variation ('stagnant,' 'decreasing,' 'continue to rise'), but the range is narrow and the phrasing is not natural or sophisticated. To improve, learn and practice using a wider range of precise vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'plateaued,' 'fluctuated,' 'peaked,' 'declined steadily') and data (e.g., 'figure,' 'statistic,' 'proportion'). Avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'huge as many as' or 'very limited with data.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent and noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues include incorrect verb forms ('be the top visitor,' 'was continue to rise'), subject-verb agreement ('the guest under 15 was not huge'), incorrect prepositions ('in the first of five years'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often simple or incomplete. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures (subject-verb-object) and common tenses (past simple for completed actions). Practice using a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences correctly. Proofread carefully for errors in articles, prepositions, and verb forms.

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