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Band 6+: The Chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing the visitation rates to different places by people living in Canada, categorized by origin: New migrants born in other countries, New migrants born in English-speaking countries, and Born in Canada. Cinema: Born in Canada just under 70%, New migrants in English-speaking countries about 65%, New migrants in other countries roughly 60%. Library: Born in Canada approximately 55%, New migrants in English-speaking countries 50%, New migrants in other countries 40%. Shopping Malls: New migrants in other countries 60%, Born in Canada around 55%, New migrants in English-speaking countries about 50%. Amusement Parks: Born in Canada around 45%, New migrants in English-speaking countries slightly over 40%, New migrants in other countries near 35%.

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The bar chart compares the percentages of three groups of individuals living in Canada who visited four different places.

Overall, the cinema was the most popular place among for all three groups, while the theatre was the least popular.

In terms of categories, for the cinema, people born in Canada had the highest proportion at 70%, followed by English-speaking migrants around 65% and other migrants about 50%. On the other hand, for the theatre, English-speaking migrants were the highest group at 25%, while native Canadian and other migrants were at 20% and 19% respectively.

For the remaining places, migrants from other non-English speaking countries had the highest percentage of library visits approximately 55%, which was higher than English-speaking migrants at 40% and native Canadians at 37%. After that, For the zoo, English-speaking migrants were highest at 50%, followed by individuals born in Canada nearly 43% and other migrants approximately 35%

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migrants: 8

other: 5

highest: 4

english-speaking: 4

canada: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by comparing the three groups across the places, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It introduces places (theatre, zoo) not mentioned in the visual description, and misreports data for cinema, library, and shopping malls. The overall trend is correctly identified (cinema most popular), but the report fails to cover all categories accurately. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and avoid introducing irrelevant information. Focus on summarizing the main trends and comparing the groups for each place as shown in the chart.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction and overall trend. However, the paragraphing could be improved: the second paragraph mixes the overall trend with specific data, and the third paragraph covers two different places (library and zoo) without clear separation. The use of cohesive devices is adequate but sometimes abrupt (e.g., 'After that,'). To improve, consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each place or grouping logically, and use smoother transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate for the task, with some good paraphrasing (e.g., 'individuals' for 'people', 'proportion' for 'percentage'). However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'highest' used multiple times) and a few awkward phrases (e.g., 'for the cinema' could be 'regarding the cinema'). To enhance lexical resource, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'greatest', 'most significant', 'notably') and more precise expressions (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. For example, 'the most popular place among for all three groups' has an extra preposition, and 'After that, For the zoo' has a capitalization error and awkward transition. Additionally, some sentences are long and could be broken down for better readability. To improve, proofread for small errors, ensure subject-verb agreement, and vary sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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