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The image contains two sections with numerical data: 1) "US Album Sales in 2020" for various artists: Lil Nas X 7000, 21 Savage 17000, Taylor Swift 107000, Ariana Grande 297000, Jonas Brothers 407000, Billie Eilish 465000, BTS 573000; 2) "The total number of streams of BTS top hits in March 2020" per streaming platform in billions: Spotify 0.96, Apple Music 0.06, YouTube 2.36, QQ 0.08.

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The table below shows the number of album sales in the USA in 2020 and BTS’s popular top hit streams worldwide in March 2020

Overall, we can see that BTS album sales are every where hight. On the other hand, Lli Nax X is one of the lowest one. Additionaly, YouTube platform streamers was hight and Apple Music platform is low one.

Focusing on the highest one first, BTS albume sale was one of the populare, it is 537000 in the year 2020. Second figure is Billie Ellish’s albume sale, it 465000. Medume trade sale of albume is Jones Brothers albume which has 407000 buyers. The next one is Ariana Grande’ albume, it is 297000. On of the lowes and last one is Lli Nax x, it was 7000.

The total number of streamers of BTS top fits in March in 2020. On of the most popular streaming platform is YouTube which has 2.36 billions. Second platforn is Spotify, it is 0,96 billions. And last two platformes which almost at the same place, they are Apple Music and QQ. Whereas, QQ (0.8 billions) streams are higher than Apple Music (0.6 billions)

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The report covers the main points of the data provided, with a clear overview and specific details. There are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., BTS album sales, QQ and Apple Music stream numbers), and some minor grammatical errors. To improve, ensure data accuracy and proofread carefully for grammar.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is very general and doesn't effectively summarize the key trends. The body paragraphs jump between datasets without clear transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons. Paragraphing needs improvement to separate the discussion of album sales from streaming data more distinctly. Use of cohesive devices is limited, resulting in a choppy and disjointed narrative.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There's a reliance on simple words like 'high,' 'low,' and 'popular.' The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more precisely and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'high,' consider using 'significant,' 'substantial,' or 'considerable.' Spelling errors also detract from the overall impression. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('are every where hight'), subject-verb agreement issues ('BTS albume sale was'), and incorrect article usage ('one of the populare'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Punctuation errors are also present. These errors significantly impede understanding and reduce the overall clarity of the report. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction.

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Band 5+: The chart show the album sales in the USA in 2020 and data on BTS top hits streams worldwide in March 2020.

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