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Band 4+: The chart shows components of GDP in Australia from 2012 to 2020.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing GDP contributions in Australia from 2012 to 2020 for the Automotive and Finance industries as percentages: Finance 2012: 7%, Automotive 2012: 4%, Finance 2014: 8%, Automotive 2014: 5%, Finance 2016: 7%, Automotive 2016: 6%, Finance 2018: 10%, Automotive 2018: 7%, Finance 2020: 14%, Automotive 2020: 8%.

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The bar chart illustrate Finance and Automotive industry changes in Australia in 2012 to 2020.

Overall, it can be seen that althougt both categories are increased. However Finance had been comsidersble rise, while Automotive increase slowly than it.

To begin, in 2012 Finance industry started with approxemantly 6%, while Automotive being with 4%. However during the 4 years period there no have dramaticly changes. Finance and Automotive change between 8% and 6% respectively. Finance sector remaining slightly higher over dispite a small decrease between 2014 and 2016.

However, it can be seen considerebly changes between to cotegories over four years of given period. The income generated from the Finance sector dramatecally increased to 12% in 2028 and about 15% in 2020, while Automotive show saw little changes, increasing to only 8%. But the end of period GDP, Finance introduse the double result wich started with about 6% and finish with 15%.

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finance: 7

automotive: 5

changes: 4

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period: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in the Finance and Automotive sectors. It correctly identifies that both sectors increased over the period, with Finance showing a more significant rise. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Finance starting at 6% instead of 7%, and reaching 12% in 2018 instead of 10%) and some unclear phrasing (e.g., 'comsidersble rise', 'increase slowly than it'). The report also includes some irrelevant or incorrect information (e.g., mentioning 2028). To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and using clearer, more precise language. Additionally, ensure that comparisons between the two sectors are clearly stated and supported by the correct figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'However' used incorrectly). Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently logical, and the progression of information is hard to follow due to grammatical issues. To improve, focus on clear topic sentences, logical sequencing of data, and accurate use of linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary range is limited and there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'illustrate' for 'illustrates', 'althougt' for 'although', 'comsidersble' for 'considerable', 'approxemantly' for 'approximately', 'dramatecally' for 'dramatically', 'introduse' for 'introduce'). Some attempts at paraphrasing are made, but word choices are often inaccurate or informal (e.g., 'show saw little changes'). To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and comparisons, and practice accurate spelling and word formation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impede understanding. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'chart illustrate'), tense inconsistencies, incorrect use of articles and prepositions, and sentence structure problems (e.g., 'there no have dramaticly changes'). Punctuation is also faulty. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction, subject-verb agreement, and accurate use of tenses. Practice writing clear, simple sentences before attempting more complex structures.

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