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The image displays a bar chart comparing the average number of items sold by two entities, Club Coffee and Espresso Express, across various coffee categories for the year 2015. Club Coffee sales: Americanos 90, Cappuccinos 110, Decaf coffees 30, Flat whites 80, Espressos 70, Caramel lattes 100, Iced coffees 40, Cafe lattes 115. Espresso Express sales: Americanos 80, Cappuccinos 60, Decaf coffees 50, Flat whites 100, Espressos 80, Caramel lattes 70, Iced coffees 60, Cafe lattes 100.

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The given chart illustrate the weekly average numbers sold in two coffee shops in New York,in 2015.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily appereant that Club Coffe sold more than Espresso Express cafe.In Club Coffee shop americanos, cappuccinos and cafe lattes very popular,however the second cafe also have sold a lot coffes such as flat whites and caramel lattes.The Cafe lattes were more popular in both shops.

Looking at the figures in more detail,Club Coffee sold 100 americanos and approximately 115 capuccinos per week.Decaf and iced coffees were relatively popular with around 75 and 60 sold items weekly.In comparison 40 flat whites,25 espressos were sold weeklly.

In Espresso Express around 80 americanos and 65 cappucinos each week.The figures for decaf and flat whites coffee composed the same number 50.In this shop caramel lattes more popular than first coffee shop ,here nearly 60 sold caramel lattes and 40 iced coffees sold per a week.Finally,espressos is the not popular type of coffee in both cafes.

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coffee: 6

lattes: 4

popular: 4

americanos: 3

caramel: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by comparing the sales of two coffee shops across various coffee types. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Club Coffee's Americanos, Decaf, Iced, Flat whites, Espressos; Espresso Express's Cappuccinos, Decaf, Flat whites, Caramel lattes, Iced coffees) and some omissions (e.g., Cafe lattes for Espresso Express). The overall trend is mentioned, but the details are not consistently accurate. To improve, ensure data is reported correctly and all categories are covered. Also, avoid informal language and grammatical errors (e.g., 'illustrate' should be 'illustrates', 'appereant' should be 'apparent', 'Coffe' should be 'Coffee', 'capuccinos' should be 'cappuccinos'). Focus on clear, accurate reporting of the main features and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, focus on using clear paragraphing and a range of linking words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variety (e.g., 'readily apparent', 'relatively popular'), but there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'appereant', 'Coffe', 'capuccinos') and misuse of words (e.g., 'composed' instead of 'was'). To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing trends and comparisons, and ensure correct spelling and word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'chart illustrate'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'have sold'), missing articles, and punctuation issues. There is limited variety in sentence structures, and many sentences are incomplete or run-on. To improve, practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences, and review basic grammar rules such as tense consistency and article usage.

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