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Band 5+: The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart detailing average daily hours spent on leisure activities in Greece during August 2019 by tourists from four countries. Chinese tourists allocated 8 hours to visiting places, 3 hours to reading books, and 2 hours at the beach. American tourists averaged 4 hours at the beach, 3.5 hours reading books, and 4 hours visiting places. Turkish tourists committed 4.5 hours to visiting places, 3 hours at the beach, and 4 hours reading books. Brazilian tourists devoted 5 hours at the beach, 1 hour reading books, and 6 hours visiting places.

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The given chart illustrates the number of hours tourists spent on activities each day in three different countries, while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

It can be clearly seen that reading books was more common to Chinese and American tourists, while Turkish and Brazilian tourists preferred spending their time at the beach.

Firstly, tourists from China and America spent most of their time reading books, which are eight and five hours a day, respectively. Having time at the beach is in second place, showing approximately three hours for Chinese and four hours for American individuals.Finally, Chinese tourists had spent 2 hours less on visiting places than Americans, which is 1 hour per day.

Turkish and Brazilian people spent most of their time at the beach, presenting no less than 5 hours each. Moreover, they both spent about 4 hours a day reading books. Lastly, three hours are used for visiting places by Turkish people, while Brazilian tourists spent only 2 hours.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

hours: 9

tourists: 6

spent: 6

three: 3

while: 3

reading: 3

books: 3

chinese: 3

brazilian: 3

their: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies in data reporting that affect the overall clarity. There is a major contradiction in the introduction, stating the activities took place in 'three different countries' when the task specifies one location (Greece). Furthermore, the data reported in the body paragraphs frequently contradicts the provided visual description (for example, stating Chinese tourists spent 8 hours reading books when the data suggests 8 hours were spent visiting places). To improve, ensure that the data points are accurately mapped to the correct categories and that the overview accurately reflects the main trends shown in the chart.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the organization of information is somewhat confusing. The overview attempts to group nationalities, but the subsequent body paragraphs do not consistently follow the logic established in the overview. For example, the first body paragraph discusses Chinese and American tourists but mixes up the activities and data points in a way that is difficult to follow. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic (e.g., one paragraph for specific activities or one paragraph per nationality) and use more sophisticated cohesive devices to link ideas rather than just 'Firstly', 'Finally', and 'Moreover'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and occasionally used inaccurately. There are instances where word choices do not convey the intended meaning clearly (e.g., 'more common to' instead of 'more common among'). There is also a lack of variety in describing data; instead of using a range of verbs and nouns to describe trends and proportions, the report relies on repetitive structures. Aim to use a wider range of academic synonyms for 'spent', 'showed', and 'people' to enhance the sophistication of the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency (switching between present and past tense), and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'which are eight and five hours a day'). The sentence structures are mostly simple or attempt complex structures that fail to land correctly. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures such as relative clauses and comparative forms, and ensure that tense usage remains consistent throughout the report.

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