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The image is a bar chart showing the average number of hours spent by Chinese, American, Turkish, and Brazilian tourists on leisure activities such as taking Chinese tours, being at the beach, reading books, and visiting places during a holiday in Greece in August 2019. Chinese tourists spent an average of 2 hours taking Chinese tours and visiting places, 1.5 hours at the beach, and 0.5 hours reading books. American tourists spent an average of 6 hours at the beach, 2 hours reading books, and 1 hour visiting places. Turkish tourists spent an average of 3 hours at the beach, 1.5 hours reading books, and 1 hour visiting places. Brazilian tourists spent an average of 4 hours at the beach, 2.5 hours visiting places, and 0.5 hours reading books.

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The bar chart compares the amount of time each day that people from four different countries spent doing activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. The activities were going to beach visiting different attraction and reading.

It is noticeable that most of the tourist spents their holidays by keeping reading as their leisure activity in Greece in August 2019. While the number of other activities did by the tourist of all these four countries remained same.

A significantly large number of chinese spent their time in reading and the number were 8 hours while the chinese tourist who went to beaches and attracting places were lower in hours and those number were 3 and 1 respectively. On other hand, American tourist who spent their holiday while reading were 5 and who went to beaches were 4 and who went to attracting places were 3 in number.

If we see the number of Turkish tourists 5 went to the beaches, 4 spent their holiday by reading and only 3 tourist went to the attracting places while spending their holiday in Greece in 2019. While Brazalian tourists who went to the beach for their holiday leisure activity were 6 in number 4 tourist kept reading as their holiday leisure activity while only 2 tourist spent their time in visiting attracting places.

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their: 9

while: 7

tourist: 7

holiday: 6

number: 6

spent: 5

reading: 5

attracting: 4

places: 4

activities: 3

greece: 3

leisure: 3

activity: 3

beaches: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by comparing the four nationalities and their leisure activities, but it contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall trend is incorrectly identified (claiming reading was the most common activity, whereas the data shows beach activities were generally more popular). Many specific figures are wrong (e.g., Chinese tourists' reading hours, American and Turkish numbers), and the report omits the 'Chinese tours' activity entirely. The structure is somewhat disorganized, with unclear grouping and a lack of clear overview. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends (e.g., beach activities being most popular overall, Chinese tourists spending the least time on leisure), and ensure all activities are covered. Use clearer paragraphing and avoid vague or incorrect statements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each nationality, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing. The overview is vague and not fully accurate, and the progression of ideas is sometimes hard to follow. Use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single clear point. Improve the use of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly, and avoid abrupt shifts between nationalities.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'attracting places' instead of 'visiting places', 'number' instead of 'hours'). There is an attempt to use a range of expressions, but errors in word form and collocation reduce clarity. Expand your vocabulary to include more precise terms for describing data (e.g., 'approximately', 'on average', 'spent time on') and use synonyms to avoid repetition. Ensure that terms like 'tourists' and 'leisure activities' are used accurately. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'tourist spents'), incorrect pluralization, and inconsistent tense usage. Sentence structures are often simple and sometimes incomplete, which affects readability. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and improve punctuation.

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