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Band 6+: The chart shows the division of household tasks bu gender in Great Britain. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The image is a bar chart showing the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. It has two sets of bars, one for males and one for females, representing the average time spent per day on each task. The tasks include cooking/baking/washing up, cleaning/tidying, gardening, pet care, maintenance/DIY jobs, and clothes/cleaning/washing/ironing/sewing. The chart indicates that females spend significantly more time on all tasks except gardening and maintenance/DIY jobs, where males spend slightly more time. The chart also includes a title, a note to write a report for a university lecturer, and a minimum word count of 150 words.

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The provided chart demonstrates the division of household activities in males and females in Great Britain, measured in minutes per person per day.

Overall, the percentage of females in mostly household tasks is higher than that of males, with the exception of gardening, pet care and maintenance odd jobs throughout the period.

Regarding the household tasks which attracted more females, the proportion of cooking,baking, and washing up rank the highest in females at nearly 73 , more than double that of males at 30. Similarly, the figure for females who work cleaning, house tidying is under 60 and also has a big disparity with more than roughly 45. Besides, the data on care of own children and play accounted for approximately 45 in women, while that of men is less than half with only 20. Clothes, washing, ironing and sewing is a small figure in females with nearly 25 and only 3% of males.

By contrast, the percentage of men who work gardening, pet care has a bigger figure with roughly 50 , more than double that of women at 20. Eventually, maintenance odd jobs has a small distance, occupying approximately 26 of females and 10 of males.

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females: 7

males: 4

household: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall comparison, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it mentions 'care of own children and play' which is not listed in the task, and it misinterprets the data for gardening/pet care and maintenance odd jobs. The report also lacks a clear structure with an overview and specific data for all tasks. To improve, ensure all categories are covered accurately, use precise figures, and organize the information logically with a clear overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the organization could be improved by grouping tasks more logically and using clearer paragraphing. The overview is somewhat vague and could be more precise. Cohesive devices are used but sometimes in a way that attracts attention (e.g., 'Regarding the household tasks which attracted more females', 'By contrast'). Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between ideas are smooth.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to the topic, such as 'division', 'household tasks', 'proportion', 'disparity', and 'maintenance odd jobs'. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, e.g., 'the percentage of females in mostly household tasks', 'the figure for females who work cleaning', 'the data on care of own children and play accounted for'. The report also uses 'percentage' and 'proportion' interchangeably, but the chart shows time in minutes, not percentages. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations, and avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, missing commas after introductory phrases, incorrect use of 'more than double that of males at 30' (should be 'at 30 minutes'), and subject-verb agreement issues. Some sentences are incomplete or awkwardly phrased, such as 'Eventually, maintenance odd jobs has a small distance'. To improve, focus on sentence structure, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct punctuation. Also, avoid using 'eventually' when you mean 'finally' or 'lastly'.

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