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The image shows the number of students who completed their dissertation projects across four distinct categories for the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. For "Completed (on time)": 1990 has 100, 2000 has 150, and 2010 has 300; for "Completed (late)": 1990 has 30, 2000 has 50, and 2010 has 75; for "Failed to write": 1990 has 20, 2000 has 20, and 2010 has 30; for "Rewrote": 1990 has 10, 2000 has 30, and 2010 has 25.

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The charts illustrate the quantity of students that submitting (on time or late), having failure result, and having another chance to submit again their dissertation assignment in 199, 2000 and 2010.

Overall, it is clear that the majority student finished the graduate research project on time in all three years. Additionally, the number of student who submitted by deadline had the upward trend during the period.

Looking at the number of student who finishing their dissertation work on time in all three years , the lowest figure was recorded for 1990, which comprised 150 students. After 20 years, the quantity of student who completed their graduate research project on time saw a significant increase, which made up 300 students. Besides, the number of students that handed their dissertation late had the similar trend in all three years. In 1990, the quantity of student who finished their project after deadline accounted for nearly 25 students, and it slightly climb to nearly 50 students after 20 years.

The figure of students that had a failure result of dissertation research in 1990 made up nearly 50 students, and it had a moderate donward trend during 20 years, which comprised only 10 students. This also the number of student who had another chance to submit their graduate research project again in 1990. After 20 years, the quantity of student that rewrote their dissertation assignment slightly increase to only 20 students.

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students: 10

their: 7

student: 7

years: 6

dissertation: 5

quantity: 4

research: 4

project: 4

number: 4

after: 4

graduate: 3

three: 3

trend: 3

which: 3

nearly: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing categories across the years. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., stating 150 students for 1990 on-time completions instead of 100, and misreporting the failed-to-write and rewrote figures). Additionally, some phrases are unclear or grammatically awkward (e.g., 'the majority student finished', 'having failure result', 'donward trend'). To improve, ensure data is accurately reported and use clearer, more precise language. Focus on presenting the key features and making comparisons accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and some abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'This also the number of student...' is confusing. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single category. Additionally, use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'while' to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some inaccuracies and repetition. For instance, 'quantity of student' is used repeatedly and is not the most precise term; 'number of students' is more appropriate. Also, 'having failure result' and 'having another chance to submit again' are awkward. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'figure', 'proportion', 'percentage') and more precise academic phrases (e.g., 'failed to submit', 'rewrote their dissertation'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'students that submitting' should be 'students who submitted', 'had the upward trend' should be 'showed an upward trend', and 'slightly climb' should be 'slightly climbed'. Also, there are missing articles and incorrect plural forms (e.g., 'the majority student' should be 'the majority of students'). To improve, review subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and sentence structure. Practice writing more complex sentences with accurate grammar.

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