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Band 5+: The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

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The image shows two bar graphs detailing the price of airline tickets ($) for flights from Sydney to Melbourne and Melbourne to Sydney in 2013 over a span of two weeks. For Sydney to Melbourne, Week 1 prices were: Mon $50, Tues $35, Wed $30, Thurs $32, Fri $40, Sat $45, Sun $35; Week 2 prices were: Mon $55, Tues $60, Wed $40, Thurs $45, Fri $50, Sat $55, Sun $50. For Melbourne to Sydney, Week 1 prices were: Mon $40, Tues $50, Wed $45, Thurs $35, Fri $55, Sat $40, Sun $50; Week 2 prices were: Mon $50, Tues $55, Wed $30, Thurs $35, Fri $45, Sat $55, Sun $55.

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The chart shows prices on flights between two Australian cities in 2-week period. Overall, while the highest prices are seen on the weekend, Monday, and Friday working days remained pronouncedly cheaper.

In terms of the first week, the highest price for flights from Sydney to Melbourn is shown on Monday, coasting exactly $80 per ticket, while the highest price for Melbourn to Sydney flight is on Friday, costing $80, which is identical to the former destination price. Notably, cost of flights on Monday, Tuesday, and Thursday is remained unchanged on both pictures just around $55, with a small upward fluctuation on Thursday on the upper diagram.

Focusing on the second week, the highest price is on Friday in both routes, with $75 for ticket from Sydney to Melbourne and just below $70 for Melbourn to Sydney route. It is worth mentioning, that on the latter diagram prices on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday are identical in both weeks; at the same time, on the former graph, Thursday is still more expansive in $5.

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The report attempts to address the task and provides an overview of the trends. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy. The report cites prices such as $80 and $75, which do not align with the provided data. While the examiner is lenient regarding visual description errors, the report's internal consistency and its relationship to the provided data are problematic. Additionally, some comparisons are unclear or mathematically inaccurate based on the provided figures. To improve, ensure that all data points cited are accurate and that comparisons between the two weeks and two routes are logically structured and clearly expressed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure by separating the two weeks into different paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and imprecise transitions. To improve, ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next and use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Conversely', 'Regarding') to link observations between the two charts more effectively.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'pronouncedly', 'fluctuation', 'identical'), but there are several spelling errors ('Melbourn', 'expansive' instead of 'expensive') and word choice issues ('coasting' instead of 'costing'). To reach a higher band, focus on the precision of your vocabulary and ensure that technical terms related to data description are used accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. For example, 'is remained unchanged' is grammatically incorrect, and there are issues with article usage and prepositional accuracy. Aim for greater control over verb tenses and passive/active voice constructions to ensure the report reads smoothly.

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