Bar Chart

Band 5+: The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows two bar graphs detailing the price of airline tickets ($) for flights from Sydney to Melbourne and Melbourne to Sydney in 2013 over a span of two weeks. For Sydney to Melbourne, Week 1 prices were: Mon $50, Tues $35, Wed $30, Thurs $32, Fri $40, Sat $45, Sun $35; Week 2 prices were: Mon $55, Tues $60, Wed $40, Thurs $45, Fri $50, Sat $55, Sun $50. For Melbourne to Sydney, Week 1 prices were: Mon $40, Tues $50, Wed $45, Thurs $35, Fri $55, Sat $40, Sun $50; Week 2 prices were: Mon $50, Tues $55, Wed $30, Thurs $35, Fri $45, Sat $55, Sun $55.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar charts below demonstrate two week period data about price for tickets on airplane on the line between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia in 2013.

Overall,three days in both weeks on airline, Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday was most stable. In contrast, on Monday price of tickets fell dramatically, while on the rest of the days from Sydney to Melbourne stayed same. In comparison, on Friday from Melbourne to Sydney decreased rapidly.

On the flights from Sydney to Melbourne on all days of week except Monday cost of tickets remain stable with almost the same numbers 75, 70, and 50, while on Monday price fell dramatically from 80 to 50.

On the airline from Melbourne to Sydney four days,Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday showed stability with $35 per ticket, while on Sunday it was $50. On Monday price lowered for $20 from $60 on first week to $40 on second week, while on Friday it also fell for $20, however from $80 to $60. Additionally, only Saturday it lowered only for $10 from $60 to $50.

Word Count: 174

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sydney: 5

melbourne: 5

price: 4

monday: 4

while: 4

tickets: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the specific data provided is largely incorrect (e.g., prices like $75, $70, $80, $60 do not match the given data). The report also fails to cover all days and both weeks comprehensively, and some comparisons are unclear or misleading. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends and key features, and ensure that all data points are correctly reported. Avoid making unsupported claims and ensure that the report is well-organized with clear paragraphing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly summarize the main trends. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate key ideas. Use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. Additionally, improve the use of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some repetition and imprecise word choices (e.g., 'airline' instead of 'route', 'on airplane' instead of 'for flights'). There is an attempt to use a range of expressions, but some are used incorrectly (e.g., 'fell dramatically' may be overstated). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms related to data description (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'remained steady', 'peaked'). Ensure that word choices are appropriate and natural in context. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, subject-verb agreement errors ('three days... was'), incorrect prepositions ('on airline'), and missing articles ('the price'). Some sentences are run-ons or lack proper punctuation. To improve, focus on sentence structure, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use punctuation correctly. Review the use of articles and prepositions to enhance accuracy.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The chart shows prices on flights between two Australian cities in 2-week period. Overall, while the highest prices are seen on the weekend, Monday, and Friday working days remained pronouncedly cheaper. In terms of the first week, the highest price for flights from Sydney to Melbourn is shown on Monday, coasting exactly $80 per ticket, […]

Band 5+

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

Overall, the flying costs between Sydney and Melbourne did not seem to be especially different. Airline prices are increased on weekends, including Monday. The ticket costs from Sydney to Melbourne for the first week Monday reached 80$, which is the highest of the week. In addition, the airfares remained under 40$ in three days, before […]

Band 4+

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The bar chart elaborates on the fare of airline tickets between Sydney and Melbourne across 14-days period in 2013. Overall, the flying costs between Sydney and Melbourne did not seem to be especially different. Airline prices are increased on weekends, including Monday. The ticket costs from Sydney to Melbourne for the first week Monday reached […]

Band 5+

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The two charts above represent the prices of plane tickets from Sydney to Melbourne and Melbourne to Sydney in 2013. Overall, both of the charts show a constant fluctuation and resemblance in the ticket prices. In the first week, the highest cost to fly from Sydney to Melbourne was on Monday at $80. Whereas the […]

Band 6+

See All

the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain subjects in 2005

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students who chose eight different university subjects in 2005. Overall, more males than females chose Science, Mathematics, Literature and Law, while females were more interested in Social Sciences, Languages and the Arts. Humanities was the only subject chosen by an equal number of male and […]

Band 7+

The chart below shows the quantity of candidates from four distinct nations in a UK college from 1999 and 2003. Sum up the data by choosing and detailing the principle capacities, and look at where proper.

The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors traveling to a specific region from four different areas – European Nations, Middle East, Far East, and Africa – between 1999 and 2003. Overall, European Nations initially contributed the highest number of visitors, but this figure experienced the most dramatic decrease over the period. In 1999 and […]

Band 7+

The chart below shows the favourite leisure activities among girls and boys

The bar chart illustrates the percnetage of favourite leisure activities of boys and girls in canada in a particular year. It is clear that, Boys are the highest percntage of leisure activities spend on shopping in a particular year in canada. by the contrast , girls are spend less portion of time on shopping in […]

Band 4+

The chart below shows the number of jobs in the tourism-related industry in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of occupations in four different tourism industries in a particular UK urban area over a 20-year period starting in 1989. In general, it is noticeable that different trends were observed in all the given categories throughout the period. Restaurants recorded the highest number of jobs almost for […]

Band 8+

the percentage contribution of the IT and service industries to the GDP

The given data illustrates the percentage contribution of the IT and service industries to the GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that both IT and service industries increased during this period. The IT industry showed a more significant growth, while the service industry increased more slowly. It is […]

Band 8+

The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

The bar chart illustrates the number of people visited museum in three age groups, over the year from 1997 to 2012 Overall, adult visitor and speacial exhibition visitors experienced a considerable increase,whereas visitors under the age of 15 followed an opposite trend. It is also noticeable that lowest. At the begining of the period,The number […]

Band 4+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium