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Band 5+: The charts below show changes in mental capacity in patients who have been given a diagnosis of mild cognitive impairment, a condition that can develop into Alzheimer's disease or other types of dementia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

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Image for topic: The charts below show changes in mental capacity in patients who have been given a diagnosis of mild cognitive impairment, a condition that can develop into Alzheimer's disease or other types of dementia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

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The image features two tables and an explanatory key detailing cognitive measures across two participant groups. The first table, labeled "Group A (followed a program of 1 hour of aerobic exercise daily for 6 months)", contains three categories: Memory recording "=", Thinking Speed recording "+", and Word Fluency recording "+". The second table, labeled "Group B (followed a program of 1 hour of nonaerobic [stretching and balancing] exercise daily for 6 months)", lists Memory recording "-", Thinking Speed recording "-", and Word Fluency recording "-". An accompanying "Key:" defines "-" as deteriorated, "=" as no change, and "+" as improved.

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The table below shows the changes in mental health in patients who have been given a deterioration in cognitive impairment, which can develop into Alzheimer’s disease and other types of dementia.

Overall, it can be seen that there are two groups, namely, Group A and Group B. Group A exercised with only aerobic moves daily for 6 months. Meanwhile, Group B did nonaerobic exercises.

In terms of Group A, they had enormous changes in Thinking Speed and Word Fluency these two types improved much more than Group B while they did stretching and balancing exercises, the quality of two knowledges deteriorated.

Group B had deteriorations in all of the three qualities in brain, also in Memory which quality get lower again. In Group B the Memory had no changes. Group B showed the worst qualities, even if they exercises with nonaerobic trainings.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and confusions. It misinterprets the data for Group A (stating Memory had no change, which is correct, but then incorrectly says Group B's Memory had no change, when it actually deteriorated). The report also incorrectly states that Group A's improvements were 'much more' than Group B's, which is not supported by the data. Additionally, the phrasing is often unclear or awkward (e.g., 'the quality of two knowledges deteriorated'), and the report fails to clearly compare the two groups as required. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the changes for each group, use clear and precise language, and ensure comparisons are logical and based on the given information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overall statement, and separate paragraphs for each group. However, the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and some contradictory statements (e.g., 'Group B had deteriorations in all of the three qualities in brain, also in Memory which quality get lower again. In Group B the Memory had no changes.'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use linking words (e.g., 'whereas', 'in contrast') to show comparisons more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are some awkward and inaccurate word choices, such as 'mental health' instead of 'mental capacity', 'enormous changes' (overstated), and 'two knowledges' (incorrect collocation). The report would benefit from using more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'cognitive abilities', 'improved', 'deteriorated', and 'remained stable'. Avoid informal or vague terms and ensure word forms are correct.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'they had enormous changes in Thinking Speed and Word Fluency these two types improved much more than Group B' (missing punctuation and unclear structure), 'the quality of two knowledges deteriorated' (incorrect noun usage), and 'which quality get lower again' (subject-verb agreement and tense issues). To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately.

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