Band 5+: The charts below show the avarage percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the pie charts and making some comparisons. However, there are some areas for improvement: * **Inaccuracies:** There are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that breakfast has the lowest proportion in all nutrients, but this is not true for added sugar. Also, the report states that 2/5 of total proportion is used in snacks, but it should be 2/5 of the added sugar proportion. * **Organization:** The report could be better organized. Consider grouping the information by meal type (breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks) and then discussing the nutrient percentages within each meal. This would make the report easier to read and understand. * **Language:** The language used is generally clear, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "highestly used" should be "used the most." Also, the phrase "accounted for" is overused. Try to vary your vocabulary and sentence structure. * **Introduction and Conclusion:** The introduction could be more concise and directly address the task. A brief conclusion summarizing the overall trends would also be beneficial.

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to group related information. For example, you could group the descriptions of each nutrient into separate paragraphs for better clarity.

The vocabulary used is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Try to use more specific vocabulary related to proportions and comparisons. For instance, instead of 'highestly used,' consider using 'consumed in the largest proportion' or similar phrases. Also, be careful with word forms (e.g., 'used highestly'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'The pie chart illustrate' should be 'The pie charts illustrate.' Also, review sentence structure to ensure sentences are clear and grammatically correct. Consistent proofreading is essential.