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Band 5+: The chart and table below show the life expectancy in 2008 and increase in life expectancy between 1983 and 2008.

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Life expectancy" showing data for 2008, and a table titled "Increase in life expectancy" covering the period between 1983 and 2008. The bar chart shows life expectancy for four countries: Japan at 82.7, Korea at 79.2, the U.S. at 77.2, and Indonesia at 70.9. The table displays the increase in life expectancy in years for the same countries: Japan with a 5.1 year increase, Korea with 9.3, the U.S. with 3.2, and Indonesia with 14.1.

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The chart and table demonstrate four countries (Japan, Korea, America and Indonesia) regarding the life expectancy in 2008 and risen life expectancy over 25 years. Overall, Japan, experienced a peak in life expectancy from 1983 to 2008, while the Korea and U.S. witnessed a familiar in the past 25 years. It is shown that Indonesia spot on the lowest expectancyof the four countries throughout the period.

Among four regions in 2008, Japan accounting for the greater proportion percentage of the life expectancy. In the meantime, Korea and U.S. both took around nearly 80% out of full percentage. In contrast, Indonesia was the least popular life expectancy, occupying about 70%.

In 1983, Indonesia led the group at 14.1 years than rest of the three countries in life expantancy, a pattern that persisted into 2008 with a wider gap. On the other hand, U.S. placed in the lowest increased years compared to other countries.

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indonesia: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and misunderstandings. It incorrectly interprets the data as percentages and misstates the overall trend, claiming Japan had the highest life expectancy from 1983 to 2008, while the data only shows 2008 figures and increases. The description of Indonesia's increase is correct, but the statement about the U.S. having the lowest increase is accurate. However, the report omits key details, such as the specific life expectancy values for each country in 2008, and includes irrelevant or inaccurate information (e.g., 'familiar in the past 25 years', 'spot on the lowest'). To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends, using precise data from the visual, and avoiding misinterpretations. Organize the report clearly, with an overview and specific comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and awkward transitions. For example, 'while the Korea and U.S. witnessed a familiar in the past 25 years' is vague and confusing. The final paragraph introduces data about 1983 that is not clearly connected to the rest of the report, and the conclusion is abrupt. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') more precisely to guide the reader. Also, avoid introducing new information in the final paragraph without a clear link to the overview.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'demonstrate', 'accounting for', 'occupying'), but there are several lexical errors and awkward choices that reduce clarity. For instance, 'risen life expectancy' should be 'rise in life expectancy', 'familiar' is used incorrectly (likely meant 'similar trend'), and 'spot on the lowest expectancy' is non-standard. Additionally, 'life expantancy' is a spelling error. To improve, focus on using precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'experienced the highest life expectancy', 'saw a significant increase') and proofread for spelling. Avoid informal or vague terms like 'popular' when describing data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect accuracy. For example, 'Japan, experienced' has an unnecessary comma, 'the Korea' should be 'Korea', 'witnessed a familiar' is missing a noun, and 'Indonesia spot on' should be 'Indonesia was at the lowest point'. Additionally, 'accounting for' should be 'accounted for' to match the past tense, and 'than rest of the three countries' should be 'than the rest of the three countries'. To improve, review subject-verb agreement, article usage, and tense consistency. Practice writing more complex sentences with accurate punctuation to enhance grammatical range.

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