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Band 6+: The charts below show the density of people in 2003, and the change of population from 2003 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two vertical bar charts detailing demographic data for six countries: Australia, Canada, Japan, Italy, Sweden, and United Kingdom. The first chart, titled "The number of people per square km in 6 countries in 2003", displays vertical axis label "People per square km" scaled from 0 to 400 at increments of 50, with recorded values: Australia (3), Canada (3), Japan (338), Italy (191), Sweden (20), and United Kingdom (243). The second chart, titled "The percentage change in population from 2003 to 2005", displays vertical axis label "Percentage" scaled from -0.2 to 1.6 at increments of 0.2, with recorded values: Australia (1.42), Canada (1.06), Japan (0.35), Italy (0.11), Sweden (-0.1), and United Kingdom (0.25).

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The first chart shows the density of people in 6 countries during 2003. The second chart shows the proportion of changes occurred in population from 2003 and 2005.

As can be seen from the charts that the proportion of density was the highest in Japan while Australia and Canada were the least. It is also clear that While Australia experienced increase in the percentage of population, Sweden saw decrease over 2 years.

In 2003, there were 338 people per square km in Japan with the highest figure. While this indicator was 243 in the United Kingdom, Italy had 191 people for per square km. Meanwhile, Sweden, Canada and Australia had the least numbers with 20, 3, 3, respectively.

During 2003 and 2005, Australia experienced 1.42% change in their population, being the biggest change in 6 countries. While this changing rate was 1.06 % in Canada, Japan and the United Kingdom saw similar change pattern in their population with 0,35 % and 0,25 % respectively. Furthermore, Italy saw 0.11 % increase in their population, being the least in the category. By contrast, Sweden population underwent decrease with -0,1 %.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

population: 6

while: 4

australia: 4

people: 3

japan: 3

canada: 3

least: 3

sweden: 3

change: 3

their: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing both charts and making relevant comparisons. It highlights key features such as the highest density in Japan, the lowest in Australia and Canada, and the population changes with Sweden's decrease. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as not explicitly stating that the UK had the second highest density or that Canada and Australia had the same density. Additionally, the phrasing could be more precise in places (e.g., 'proportion of changes' and 'underwent decrease'). Overall, the response is clear and covers the main points, but could be improved with more accurate data presentation and smoother transitions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphs for each chart. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the use of 'While' at the beginning of a sentence without a comma, and the phrase 'the proportion of changes occurred' could be more concise. The overall flow is logical, but the transitions between ideas could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'density of people' vs 'number of people per square km'). However, there are a few awkward phrasings and minor errors, such as 'the proportion of changes occurred' and 'being the biggest change in 6 countries'. The range of vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and sophisticated. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'the proportion of changes occurred' should be 'the proportion of change that occurred', and 'While Australia experienced increase' should be 'While Australia experienced an increase'. Additionally, there are comma splices and missing commas after introductory phrases. The range of structures is limited, with repetitive use of 'While' and 'with'. To improve, focus on sentence variety and accuracy.

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