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Band 5+: The charts below show the main causes of deforestation in Southeast Asia in 2022 and the number of endangered species by category in North America in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a pie chart titled "Main Causes of Deforestation in Southeast Asia, 2022" with a legend listing five categories. The slices and their corresponding percentages are: Agriculture at 45%, Logging at 25%, Infrastructure at 15%, Urban Expansion at 10%, and Mining at 5%.

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the grah illustrates the main aspects that generate deforestation in Asia in 2022 and at the same time the afected species in North America .Overall the agriculture is the main section that cause more damage in the lose of trees in Asia , while Mining is the cause that has a lower impact .

First of all the chart can expose that there is a big diference between the causes ,agriculture being the main one has a 45%, on the other hand the Mining has a 5% showing that the difference is of 40%.

Some other information is that the other aspects do not have the same % as agriculture but they start to decrease the impact showing that Logging has a 25%and infrastructure 15% demostrating a 10% of diferences in the impact the same % as the urban expansion which also has a small % compared with the other causes .

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The report attempts to address the task by describing the main causes of deforestation, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It fails to mention the second chart about endangered species in North America, which is a key requirement. The data for the pie chart is mostly correct, but the report includes irrelevant comparisons and some unclear phrasing. To improve, ensure both charts are covered, use precise data, and avoid vague or repetitive statements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The overview is present but could be more clearly separated from the details. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'First of all' is used but no 'secondly' follows). The final paragraph is a single long sentence that is difficult to follow. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, employ a range of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly'), and break down complex ideas into shorter, clearer sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'generate deforestation', 'lose of trees', 'demostrating'). There is an attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'aspects', 'causes', 'sections'), but the range is limited. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'account for', 'constitute', 'significant proportion', 'minor contributor') and avoid informal or incorrect terms. Also, ensure correct spelling (e.g., 'graph', 'affected', 'difference').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede clarity. There are missing articles (e.g., 'the grah' should be 'the graph'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'cause more damage' should be 'causes more damage'), and run-on sentences. The final sentence is particularly problematic. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use a variety of complex and compound sentences correctly, and proofread for basic errors. Practicing writing clear, concise sentences with correct punctuation will enhance accuracy.

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