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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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The image contains two charts depicting Japanese tourists traveling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and Australia's percentage share of the market. The bar chart shows a steady increase from 5 million in 1985 to 15 million in 1995, with a peak at 11 million in 1990. The line graph indicates Australia's share rose from 2% in 1985 to 6% in 1995, with fluctuations between 4-5% in between.

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The chart illustrates the number of japanese tourists all around globe between 1985 to 1995. And the percentage of these tourists visiting Australia also boom

Overall, As can be seen from illustration japanese tourists travelling abroad is steadily increased as well as tourists in Australia

According to the bar graph. It is clearly seen that from the year 1985, japenese tourists had significantly increased till 1992 except in 1991. The tourist had increased from 4.2million to 12 million.Between 1992 to 1993 there is no growth or decline. From the year 1993 to 1995 Indeed the travellers are skyrocket it reached to 16 million.

Whereas on the line graph.The people visiting Australia has tremendous increased from 2% in 1985 to 4.5% in 1989. It is slightly declined in 1990. But after that there is constant increase in percentage of travellers till the end

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The report provides a good overview of the data, but some details are missing. For example, the report does not mention the peak in 1990 or the fluctuations between 4-5% in the line graph. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of paragraphs could be improved.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The report could benefit from more precise and varied language.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of punctuation and sentence structure needs improvement.

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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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