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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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The image contains two charts depicting Japanese tourists traveling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and Australia's percentage share of the market. The bar chart shows a steady increase from 5 million in 1985 to 15 million in 1995, with a peak at 11 million in 1990. The line graph indicates Australia's share rose from 2% in 1985 to 6% in 1995, with fluctuations between 4-5% in between.

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The above chart illustrates number of Japanese tourists excursion from 1985 to 1995 and them commuting to Australia.

Overall Japanese tourists rose from 1985 to 1995.Similarly Japanese moving to Australia also increased despite minor fluctuations.

Japanese started commuting abroad for tourism and the least amount was in 1985 being approximately 5 million. This number doubled till 1990. The next half decade saw a gradual rise till 1994 and culminating with all time high,almost 16 million tourists in 1995.

Japanese tourist that moved to Australia were nearly two percent at the start of the 1985,then surged until 1989. It faced slight pit in the upcoming year then saw a substantial rise again till 1994 at more than 6%, it flattenend out at 6 % in the last year.

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main trends in both charts. However, some key details could be more precisely described for a higher score. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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4.5

The report's organization is understandable, but the flow could be improved with clearer transitions and paragraph structure. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range of more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the report. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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