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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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The image contains two charts depicting Japanese tourists traveling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and Australia's percentage share of the market. The bar chart shows a steady increase from 5 million in 1985 to 15 million in 1995, with a peak at 11 million in 1990. The line graph indicates Australia's share rose from 2% in 1985 to 6% in 1995, with fluctuations between 4-5% in between.

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The bar graph illustrates the volume of Japanese citizens visiting abroad from 1885 to 1995 while the line graph displays the share of these tourists traveling to Australia during the same decade.

Overall, it can be seen that Japanese tourists travelling abroad experienced marginally rise during the decade,whereas Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market as well experienced increase with fluctuations.

In 1985, Japanese tourists travelling abroad started with around 5 millions,progressively climbed to 11 millions in 1990,and it tediously declined before reaching peak in 1995(15 millions)

Additionally, the proportion of Australia’s share initially was 2% in 1985.Then it marginally went up to approximately 5% in 1988.After this Australia’s share experienced fluctuations,and reached the highest point in 1993,until slightly downward to 6% in 1994.

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main trends in both charts. However, some key details are missing or slightly inaccurate, and the overall analysis could be more precise and insightful. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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