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Band 4+: The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes two bar graphs showing the number of people in Europe affected by four types of noise pollution in cities and rural areas both during the day and night in 2007. The top graph, labeled "City," displays data for Traffic (Day: 64 million, Night: 48 million), Train (Day: 10 million, Night: 8 million), Aircraft (Day: 4 million, Night: 1 million), and Industry (Day: 0.25 million, Night: not visible). The bottom graph, labeled "Rural," provides data for Traffic (Day: 34 million, Night: 24 million), Train (Day: 8 million, Night: 6 million), Aircraft (Day: 2 million, Night: 1 million), and Industry (Day and Night: 0 million). The y-axis for both graphs measures the number of people in millions, with the City graph's maximum value at 100 million and the Rural graph's maximum value at 70 million.

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The charts display about how many European people who were affected by the noise from different sources, which happened during the day and at night in cities and countrysides in the year of 2007.

Generally, both high residential area and countryside are complained About the noise pollution which mostly came traffic on the road. Also the day time had more negative effects more than the night time in both areas.

Firstly, Industrial noise caused the fewest complaints according for only a small proportion of the total. Moreover, most complained are from the city and doesn’t harm the rural zone.

The people in city who are affected by the noise from the aircraft were around 5 millions people in both day and night time. While in the people in the residential area were not affected that much by plane noise only 2millions said about in day time and 1 millions in night time.

The city rail way system was called out by 10millions people in the day time. However the number of people who got interup by train at night are less than 2millions in the morning. Although rural areas still have some affected by train noise the people who complain are around 8millions in day time and 6at night time.

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people: 7

noise: 6

night: 6

affected: 4

about: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the primary sources of noise and the general trend that daytime noise affects more people than nighttime noise. However, there are several issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some figures provided do not align with the visual description (for example, the report states train noise at night in cities is less than 2 million, whereas the data suggests 8 million). Additionally, the overview is present but could be more sophisticated, and the body paragraphs contain grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occasionally obscure the meaning. To improve, focus on ensuring all data points are reported accurately and work on using more precise academic vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor sentence structure and weak cohesive devices. While you attempt to use transition words like 'Firstly', 'Moreover', and 'However', they are often used incorrectly or in a way that does not smoothly connect the ideas. To improve, focus on using a variety of linking words to show relationships between data points (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Regarding') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Avoid starting sentences with 'While' if the clause is not properly connected to a main clause.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often repetitive or inaccurate. There are several instances of improper word choices, such as 'countrysides' (which is uncountable), 'called out' (which is used incorrectly in this context), and 'interup' (spelling error). Additionally, some phrasing is unnatural, such as 'the people in the residential area were not affected that much by plane noise only 2millions said about in day time'. To improve, work on learning collocations related to data description (e.g., 'affected by', 'impacted by', 'accounted for') and ensure you use precise nouns and verbs to describe trends and quantities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'most complained are'), tense consistency, and sentence construction (e.g., 'The charts display about how many...'). There are also errors in how numbers are expressed (e.g., '5 millions people' should be '5 million people'). To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of relative clauses and complex sentences. Pay close attention to singular/plural agreement and the correct use of prepositions.

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