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The image presents three pie charts with a legend listing five categories: Green Party, Conservatives, Undecided, Labour, and Liberal Democratic. For "One Month before the June 2005 Election", the data points are: Conservatives at 41%, Labour at 27%, Liberal Democratic at 18%, Green Party at 10%, and Undecided at 4%. For "6 Months after the June 2005 Election", the percentages are: Conservatives at 41%, Labour at 25%, Green Party at 14%, Liberal Democratic at 10%, and Undecided at 10%. For "12 Months after the June 2005 Election", the values are: Conservatives at 36%, Labour at 27%, Undecided at 20%, Green Party at 10%, and Liberal Democratic at 7%.

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The three pie charts compare the popularity of four political parties in a country one month before the June 2005,six and twelve months afterwards,together with the proportion of undecided people.

Overall,the Conservatives remained the most popular party throughout the period,although therir support eventually declined.Meanwhile,the proportion of undecided people increased significantly,while the support for Liberal Democratic fell steadily.

One month before the election,the conservatives had the largest share of support,at 41%,followed by Labour at 27%.Liberal Democratic ranked third,at 18% while Green Party accounted for 10%.Only 4% of people were undecided.

Six month after the election,the Conservative support remained unchanged at 41%,while the Labour’s figure slipped slightly to 25%.The Green Party gained some support,rising to 14%,whereas the Liberal Democratic fell to 10% ,equal to the proportion of undecided people.

By twelve months after the election,despite a slight decline to 36%,the Conservative party still maintained its leading position,over the Labour,whose figure had recovered to 27%.The proportion of undecided people doubled to 20%,while the Green Party’s popularity returned to its original value,at 10%.The Liberal Democratic experienced a further (mạnh hơn)decline,reaching just 7%,the lowest among the four parties

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proportion: 4

undecided: 4

party: 4

democratic: 4

month: 3

support: 3

people: 3

liberal: 3

green: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing a clear overview and accurately describing the main trends across the three time periods. The data is presented logically, and the key features, such as the Conservatives' dominance and the rise in undecided voters, are highlighted. There are a few minor omissions and inaccuracies, such as not explicitly mentioning the Green Party's position in the final period and a slight error in the Liberal Democratic's decline description, but these do not detract significantly from the overall quality. To improve, ensure all data points are consistently referenced and avoid minor typographical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear structure that includes an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for each time period. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Meanwhile', and 'By twelve months' helps to guide the reader. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the missing space after '2005,' and the phrase 'over the Labour' which slightly disrupts the flow. To improve, ensure that all sentences are smoothly connected and that transitions between ideas are seamless. Additionally, consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, with effective use of terms like 'accounted for', 'slipped slightly', 'gained some support', and 'maintained its leading position'. There is evidence of flexibility in lexical choice, and the language is generally precise. However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'therir' (typo for 'their') and the inclusion of a Vietnamese word 'mạnh hơn' in parentheses, which is inappropriate. To improve, proofread carefully to eliminate typos and ensure that all vocabulary is used accurately and naturally. Expanding the range of synonyms for 'decline' and 'increase' could also enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences and comparative forms, which shows a good attempt at grammatical range. However, there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect accuracy. For example, 'One month before the June 2005,six and twelve months afterwards' lacks proper punctuation and clarity, and 'Six month after' should be 'Six months after'. Additionally, 'the Labour's figure' is incorrect as 'Labour' is a party name and should not have a possessive apostrophe. The phrase 'over the Labour' is awkward and should be rephrased. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of apostrophes, and ensure that all sentences are grammatically complete. Proofreading for punctuation, especially commas and spaces, will also enhance accuracy.

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