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Band 6+: The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing what makes people most happy divided by age groups: people under 30 and people over 30. The chart for people under 30 has percentages as follows: Achievement at work 31%, Other factors 14%, Travelling 15%, Having a good appearance 18%, Doing hobbies 22%. The chart for people over 30 has percentages as follows: Achievement at work 32%, Being with family 14%, Financial security 20%, Other factors 10%, Doing hobbies 24%.

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The two piecharts shows the proportion of 5 types of reasons that make people happy for different age groups.

Overall, the first pie chart shows the reason for the people being happy under the age group of 30. The highest percentage for happiness is achievement at work which is 31%. Almost a quarter of people are happy while doing their hobbies. At the same time, 18% of young individuals are satisfied with their appearance. A small percentage of people are happy with travelling and other factors which is 15% and 14% respectively.

On the other hand, the second pie chart shows the reasons for people being happy above the age group of 30. Almost a similar percentage of both ages are happy with achievements at work which is 32% and doing hobbies. In the elder group, 20% of individuals feel elated with financial security. In contrast, 14% of elder feel delighted being with family, and 10% to other factors as compared to young people.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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happy: 6

shows: 3

being: 3

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percentage: 3

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other: 3

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Task Response

7.5

The report adequately summarizes the main features of the charts and makes relevant comparisons between the two age groups. However, some minor details, such as the exact percentages, are not accurately reported.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The report is well-organized and easy to follow, with clear transitions between paragraphs. However, some sentence structures are simple and could be more varied.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are not precise (e.g., 'delighted' instead of 'happy'). There is room for more sophisticated vocabulary and idiomatic expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The report demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, but there are some minor errors in grammar and punctuation (e.g., missing articles, incorrect verb tenses).

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Band 6+: The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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