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Band 5+: The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing what makes people most happy divided by age groups: people under 30 and people over 30. The chart for people under 30 has percentages as follows: Achievement at work 31%, Other factors 14%, Travelling 15%, Having a good appearance 18%, Doing hobbies 22%. The chart for people over 30 has percentages as follows: Achievement at work 32%, Being with family 14%, Financial security 20%, Other factors 10%, Doing hobbies 24%.

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The given two pie charts compare people with various age group by five categorizes which give them happiness

Overall, it can be clearly seen that, doing hobbies make up the biggest percentage of happiness by all age groups. However, doing other factors was the least significant part of pleasure.

To begin with the similarities, achievement at work makes people the most happy even if they are under or over 30, at 31% and 32% for both respectively. Turning to doing hobbies, it makes up 22% of young generation happy and also with being 2% more, people over 30, take pleasure of doing their beloved activity.

When it comes to differences, less then of fifth, people who are not 30, feel happy while traveling, but other 14% of people, who have already 30 and over, prefer spending time with their family and take pleasure. Moreover, 20% of financial security offers them happiness, while with being 2% less having a good appearance give happiness to people who are not 30

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The report provides a good overview of the data, but misses some key details. For example, it doesn't mention that 'other factors' is the least significant category for both age groups.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of commas and conjunctions needs improvement.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an unnatural way. The use of synonyms and more precise language could be improved.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and flow of the message. The use of tenses, articles, and prepositions needs improvement.

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