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Band 5+: The charts show average levels of participation in education and the highesteducation level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore.

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The image displays data from Singapore between 2000 and 2010. For average years at school: in 2000, males 9.5, females 8.5; in 2002, males 10, females 9; in 2004, males 11, females 9.5; in 2006, males 11.5, females 10; in 2008, males 12, females 10.5; in 2010, males 13, females 11.5. The pie charts show education levels: in 2000, primary 30.87%, secondary 44.11%, high school 7.3%, university 7.5%, master's 10.22%; in 2010, primary 21.1%, secondary 35.26%, high school 12.63%, university 16.35%, master's 14.66%.

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The charts below shows average number of participation in education and the peakest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore.

Overall, men spent more years at school than women throghout the period. In addition, propotion of people with high qualifications such as secondary school and high school qualification increased. Both charts had similiar rise in the figures.

Looking at the bar chart, adult males spent most of their time at school, approximately 9 years in 2002. Compared to the women, females spent their time less than males only 8 years in the same year. In 2002, the proportion of adult men slightly increased at 9,5 roughly. Regarding to the adult women, it remains in the same position. However, in 2008 the number of males considerably rose to almost 11 years at school, while female figure reached about 8 years. By 2010, these levels had grown up to approximately 11 and 8,5 years, respectively.

Regarding the pie chart, in 2010, high school qualification accounted the highest propotion. Secondary school qualification was in the second place (26.3%). Subsequently, in 2010 university qualification represented the highest number at 32.93%, while secondary school experienced gradual decrease at 30.31%. By contrast, only primary school qualification fell from 25.77% to 15.2%. The master qualification also experienced significant downward.

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school: 9

years: 6

qualification: 6

number: 3

spent: 3

women: 3

secondary: 3

adult: 3

males: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall trend is identified, but specific figures are often incorrect or vague (e.g., 'approximately 9 years in 2002' for males, 'almost 11 years' in 2008, and 'approximately 11 and 8.5 years' in 2010). The pie chart description is also confused: it incorrectly states that high school qualification was the highest in 2010, and the percentages cited (e.g., 26.3%, 32.93%, 30.31%, 25.77%, 15.2%) do not match the provided data. Additionally, the report mentions a decrease in master's qualification, which is contrary to the data showing an increase. The structure is present, but the inaccuracies in key areas detract from task achievement. To improve, ensure that all figures are accurately reported and that the main trends are clearly and correctly summarized.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for each chart. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the overview mentions 'both charts had similiar rise in the figures,' but the pie chart description does not clearly support this. Additionally, the paragraph on the pie chart lacks clear organization, mixing data from different years without a clear sequence. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the progression of ideas is smooth. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and paragraphs, and avoid vague references like 'these levels' without clear antecedents.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased,' 'rose,' 'decreased,' 'experienced a decline'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings. For instance, 'peakest education level' is incorrect; 'highest education level' would be appropriate. 'Propotion' is a misspelling of 'proportion.' 'Similiar' should be 'similar.' 'Regarding to' is incorrect; use 'Regarding' or 'With regard to.' 'Accounted the highest propotion' should be 'accounted for the highest proportion.' The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain phrases. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'significant,' 'moderate,' 'slight,' 'plateau,' 'surpass') and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a variety of sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The charts below shows' should be 'The charts below show' (subject-verb agreement). 'Throghout' is a misspelling of 'throughout.' 'Compared to the women, females spent their time less than males only 8 years' is awkward and unclear; consider rephrasing. 'It remains in the same position' should be 'it remained in the same position' (tense consistency). 'Grown up to' is not appropriate; use 'increased to.' There are also issues with articles and prepositions (e.g., 'in 2002' vs. 'in the same year'). To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, consistent use of past tense, and correct preposition usage. Proofread to eliminate spelling errors and ensure sentences are grammatically complete.

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