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Band 5+: The charts shows the online sales for retail sectors in a South American country in 2009 and 2019.

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The image presents online sales data for retail sectors in a South American country for 2009 and 2019: 2009 had travel at 36%, clothes at 16%, music/film at 21%, books at 27%; 2019 had travel at 29%, clothes at 15%, music/film at 33%, books at 23%.
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The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of online sale for retail sector in a South American country in 2009 to 2019.

Overall, the biggest slice of the pie chart is taken up by travel in 2009 and the percentage is 38 percentage, which made up by nearly one-third of total online sale. On the other hand, in 2019 the biggest lies of the pie chart is taken up by music/film which made up nearly one-third of total sales.

It is important to note that, in 2009 the percentage of travel was 38 percentage. On the hand in 2019 the travel percentage is 29 percentage. The percentage slightly lower. However, in 2009, travel has taken over dominate position solely 38 percentage. But in 2019, music/film has taken over dominate position solely 33 percentage. According to the illustration 16 percentage online sale in 2009 was made by books but in 2019 books sale is significantly higher than 2009. Which followed by 2009 music/film and clothes with exactly 26 percentage and 20 percentage respectively and 2019 books and travel is exactly 23 percentage and 29 percentage. Online sale in 2009, travel took the highest number and it was exactly 38 percentage and in 2019 music/film took the highest number and it was exactly 33 percentage.

In comparison, travel products and film/music took turns holding the top spot. Film and music showed the greatest rise, climbing by 12 percentage points.

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
percentage: 17
travel: 7
online: 4
taken: 4
music/film: 4
exactly: 4
chart: 3
which: 3
books: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task but lacks precision in data presentation and contains some inaccuracies. The overall trend is described, but some details are unclear or slightly incorrect.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report's structure is somewhat disorganized. The flow of information is inconsistent, making it challenging to follow the comparisons smoothly. Improvements in paragraphing and logical sequencing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5
The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement in the range and precision of language. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the report's quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5
The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Significant improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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