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The image presents pie charts illustrating the frequency of video watching on one online site by different age groups in Australia in 2017. Age 25-34: 39% daily, 29% weekly, 14% monthly, 18% rarely/never. Age 35-44: 26% daily, 32% weekly, 15% monthly, 27% rarely/never. Age 45-59: 16% daily, 24% weekly, 11% monthly, 49% rarely/never. Age 60+: 8% daily, 17% weekly, 10% monthly, 65% rarely/never.

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The pie charts illustrate how frequently people from four different age groups in Australia watched videos on a particular online platform in 2017 Overall, daily video watching was more common among younger adults, whereas the proportion of people who rarely or never watched videos increased with age

Beginning with the most active demographic, people aged 25-34 recorded the highest proportion of daily viewers, accounting for 39% of daily video watching. In the same age group, the figure for people watching videos at least once a week stood at 29%

By contrast, older age groups were less likely to watch videos on a daily basis. In particular, people aged 55 and above had the highest percentage of individuals who rarely or never used the platform, while the proportion of regular daily viewers in this category was considerably lower compared to younger generations

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daily: 5

videos: 4

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The report provides a clear overview and identifies the main trends, such as the correlation between age and frequency of use. However, the response is somewhat incomplete. While the first two paragraphs provide specific data, the final paragraph lacks specific numerical evidence to support the comparisons made. To improve, ensure that all key categories and age groups are supported by data from the charts to provide a more comprehensive summary of the information presented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is logically organized and easy to follow. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Beginning with', and 'By contrast' helps guide the reader through the comparison. To reach a higher band, the report could benefit from more seamless transitions between the specific data points and a more comprehensive overview that synthesizes the trends across all age groups more fluidly.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, with good use of terms like 'demographic', 'proportion', and 'regular daily viewers'. The phrasing is natural. To improve, you could incorporate more sophisticated synonyms for 'people' or 'age groups' (e.g., 'cohorts', 'segments') and use more varied verbs to describe the trends (e.g., 'peaked', 'dominated', 'constituted').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical control is excellent. You have used a variety of complex structures, such as subordinate clauses and comparative forms, with high accuracy. Punctuation is used correctly to separate ideas. There are no noticeable errors that impede communication.

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