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Band 5+: The diagram below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

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The image shows a line graph depicting the changing rates of crime in New Port city from 2003 to 2012, measured by the number of incidents. For Burglary, the incidents were: 2003 (3400), 2004 (3700), 2005 (3100), 2006 (2600), 2007 (1600), 2008 (1200), 2009 (1300), 2010 (1300), 2011 (1500), and 2012 (1300). For Car Theft, the incidents were: 2003 (2750), 2004 (2800), 2005 (2750), 2006 (2100), 2007 (2300), 2008 (2100), 2009 (2300), 2010 (2600), 2011 (2500), and 2012 (2350). For Robbery (theft from the person), the incidents were: 2003 (700), 2004 (800), 2005 (850), 2006 (600), 2007 (550), 2008 (500), 2009 (650), 2010 (700), 2011 (600), and 2012 (650).

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The line graph below provides information about three types of crime that New Port city mostly witnessed over 9-year period from 2003 to 2012.

In general, all areas had decrease, except a robbery, which remained unchanged, with a car thefting becoming the most frequent and the robbery being least happened crime by the end of the analyzed period.

A bulglary at first was most popular and reached its maximum in 2004 with around 3700 incidents.However plummeted in four years and indicated about 1200.The following years had fluctuations and in 2012 the number of the reported bulglary cases were just over 1300.Unlike the bulglary, the robbery did not have significant rises or declines and showed its initial quantity of under 1200 by the end of the given period.The car thefting redundancy happened after 2005 and started increasing in 2008.When its frequency were just over 2500 in 2010 indicator slightly fell and in 2012 showcased approximately 2400.

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bulglary: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends for the three crime types over the period. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the overall clarity. For example, the statement that robbery remained unchanged is not accurate, as it fluctuated between 500 and 850 incidents. Additionally, the description of car theft is somewhat confusing and contains imprecise figures. The report would benefit from clearer organization, more accurate data presentation, and a more formal tone. Ensure that all key features are covered and that the data is reported accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'However plummeted', 'Unlike the bulglary'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the body paragraphs are not clearly separated and ideas are not developed smoothly. To improve, use clear topic sentences, ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect, and employ a range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks precision and variety. There are several word formation errors (e.g., 'thefting', 'bulglary', 'redundancy') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'mostly witnessed', 'indicated', 'showcased'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is little use of synonyms or more sophisticated terms. To improve, use accurate crime-related vocabulary (e.g., 'burglary', 'car theft', 'robbery'), and vary expressions for describing trends (e.g., 'peaked', 'declined', 'fluctuated', 'remained stable').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'its frequency were'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'plummeted' without a subject), and missing articles or prepositions. The range of sentence structures is limited, and many sentences are incomplete or run-on. To improve, focus on writing complete sentences with correct grammar, use a variety of complex structures, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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