Bar Chart

Band 4+: The diagram below shows the percentage of deaths from heart disease and cancer, and calories consumed from processed foods in different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The diagram below shows the percentage of deaths from heart disease and cancer, and calories consumed from processed foods in different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays data on percentages of deaths from heart disease and cancer and calories from processed foods across various countries. Hungary: Heart and cancer deaths 90%, calories 40%. USA: Heart and cancer deaths 70%, calories 40%. Belgium: Heart and cancer deaths 70%, calories 30%. Sweden: Heart and cancer deaths 60%, calories 20%. Finland: Heart and cancer deaths 50%, calories 40%. Portugal: Heart and cancer deaths 40%, calories 20%. Venezuela: Heart and cancer deaths 30%, calories 30%. Greece: Heart and cancer deaths 20%, calories 20%. Mexico: Heart and cancer deaths 20%, calories 10%. Korea: Heart and cancer deaths 10%, calories 30%. Thailand: Heart and cancer deaths 10%, calories approximately 3%. Laos: Heart and cancer deaths 1%, calories 2%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The diagram illustrates the percentage of death from heart disease and cancer, and calories consumed from processed foods in different countries. Overall, the percentage of deaths was higher than that of consumed calories from processed foods. At the end, the calories roses.

In the beginning, the percentage of death was 89 percent and calories was almost 10 percent in Hungary. After that, the percentage of deaths fell slightly over the other countries. Meanwhile, the calories consumed from processed foods increased over the other countries.

The death percentage decreased in other countries than Hungary. The percentage of death was 20 percent in Finland and calories was 60 percent. Many people of different countries died from heart and cancer disease. In Thailand, people died from disease of heart and cancer was reduce to 10 percent. While, the calories consumed from processed food was 70 percent.

At the end, death percentage reduced and consumed galories increased.

Word Count: 153

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percentage: 7

calories: 7

death: 5

consumed: 5

percent: 5

processed: 4

countries: 4

heart: 3

disease: 3

cancer: 3

foods: 3

other: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The response addresses the task by mentioning the two variables and some countries, but it contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. Key data points are misreported (e.g., Finland's death percentage is given as 20% instead of 50%, and calories as 60% instead of 40%; Thailand's calories are stated as 70% instead of approximately 3%). The overview is partially correct but not fully supported. The report lacks clear comparisons between countries and does not cover all the main features. To improve, ensure accurate data extraction, provide a clear overview of the main trends, and make relevant comparisons between countries.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'At the end', 'In the beginning', 'After that', 'While'). The grouping of information is not logical, making it difficult to follow. To improve, organize the data more coherently, perhaps by grouping countries with similar trends, and use a wider range of cohesive devices appropriately. Ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'percentage', 'death', 'calories', 'consumed'). There are also errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'roses' instead of 'rose', 'galories' instead of 'calories'). To improve, use a wider range of vocabulary, including synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'proportion', 'mortality rate', 'intake'). Pay attention to collocations and spelling. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, tense inconsistencies, and incorrect sentence structures. For example, 'the calories roses' should be 'the calories rose', 'people died from disease of heart and cancer was reduce' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Punctuation is also sometimes faulty. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures accurately, and proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors. Practice constructing complex sentences with correct grammar.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The diagram below shows the percentage of deaths from heart disease and cancer, and calories consumed from processed foods in different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the death proportions from heart illnesses and cancer,in comparison to calories consumed from industrial foods in 7 different countries. Overall, the percentage of heart diseases and cancer shows a significant decrease in all different countries while the calories consumed in those seven cities shows a massive rate increase .Moreover,Finland and Korea […]

Band 4+

See All

The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

The bar chart illustrates the numbers of three different types of tourists to a museum between 1997 and 2012, including adult visitors, people under 15 and special exhibition visitors. Overall, while the figure for adult visitors and children aged under 15 displayed similar trends throughout the period, the number of special exhibition tourists experienced an […]

Band 8+

The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people.

The bar chart illustrates the observation results of 4 different housing preferences (flats, terraced houses, detached houses, and semi-detached houses) in 3 British cities in 2005. Overall, it is noticeable that flats were the most popular choice in London, whereas detached and semi-detached houses were preferred by larger proportions of people living in Oxford and […]

Band 8+

The chart below shows the percentage of people who used public transport to travel to work in four cities in 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the share of commuters who utilized public vehicles in four different cities, namely Tokyo, Paris, Sydney, and Toronto over two subsequent decades. Overall, all of the aforementioned cities saw marginal or no differences between 2000 and 2020. While Tokyo and Paris experienced the highest shares in these years, Sydney […]

Band 7+

The bar chart shows the number and the purpose of trips by made by men and women in a certain European country in 2007.

The bar chart shows the number and the purpose of trips taken by men and women in a certain European country in 2007. Overall, it is clear that travelling to work accounted for the highest number of trips for men, while women made more journeys for shopping. In contrast, day trips were the least common […]

Band 7+

The bar chart below shows the average income and accommodation costs per person in Toronto

The bar chart illustrates the number ( in hundred $) of overall profit and accommodation expenses per individual from 1980 to 2010 in Toronto. Moreover, the pie chart compares the expenditure of people in 5 various necessities. Overall, the monthly income rose sharply at the end of the period,while the price of apartment leases declined […]

Band 6+

See All