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Band 4+: The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.

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The image illustrates a pineapple growth and preparation diagram with the following data points: optimal temperatures 23-30°C, pineapple crown size 26cm, growth period 7 months, pineapple height at harvest 30cm, pineapple weight 2kg. Post-harvest preparation includes 5 months of ethaline treatment, factory processing, wax application, packaging, and subsequent steps of juice extraction and export.

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The supplied graph depicts how to growing and producing pineapple. In general, he production of this process involes a wige range of stages from yielding to manufacturing.

Initially, from crown with 26 centimetres, it grow up with the ideal temperature (23-30), then, after 7 months, the pieapples go up, at that time, these agricultural products is irrgated ethylene. Then standble pineapple with 30 centimetres and 2 kilograms is collected. In the next stage, These pineapple are wash into a water floor. Then, they divide into three ways to use pineapple. Firstly, pineapples is pealed, and put into an extractor to create pineapple juice.

In other ways, pineapples is pealed and cut into circles. Those circles pineapple is put into cans with sugar. In another methods, pineaplles is washed then added in the churns to export to another countries.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the process but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It mentions the crown size, temperature, growth period, and height/weight, but incorrectly states that ethylene is irrigated during growth instead of after harvest. It also omits key steps such as wax application, packaging, and the specific details of juice extraction and export. The description of the three uses is incomplete and lacks clarity. Additionally, there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect readability. To improve, ensure all main stages are covered accurately and use clearer, more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and a description of the process, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, 'In the next stage, These pineapple are wash into a water floor' is confusing, and the division into three ways is not clearly signaled. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, use a clear overview, sequence markers (e.g., 'first', 'then', 'after that'), and ensure pronouns and articles are used correctly to maintain clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'growing and producing' instead of 'growing and preparing', 'irrgated' instead of 'treated with ethylene', 'standble' instead of 'standard'). There is an attempt to use some technical terms (e.g., 'ethylene', 'extractor'), but the range is limited. To improve, use a wider variety of precise vocabulary related to processes (e.g., 'cultivation', 'harvesting', 'processing', 'packaging') and ensure correct spelling and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'these agricultural products is'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'is pealed' instead of 'are peeled'), and missing articles (e.g., 'with 26 centimetres' should be 'with a crown of 26 centimetres'). Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout.

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