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Band 6+: The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a seven-step process of honey production in a hexagonal flowchart. Step 1 shows bees in a hive, step 2 shows bees collecting nectar from flowers, step 3 shows the nectar, step 4 shows bees placing nectar into honeycomb cells, step 5 shows a bee fanning air with its wings, step 6 shows water evaporation from the nectar, and step 7 shows the final product, honey, in a jar and honeycomb.

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The above depiction shows the step-by-step process of producing honey by bees.

In general, there are seven main steps in the manufacturing of honey, commencing with the bees building a hive and finishing with honey being created and harvested into honey jars.

Initially, in step one, honeybees have to construct their hive which consists of many idividually built cells, then they fly in order to search for flowers. In stage three when they find a perfect flower, they extract the nectar from it, which put in hexagon-shaped cells.

In the remaining steps, in step five, honeybees have to collectively fanning their wings intending to cool down the honey. As a result, this helps the water changing to a gas quicker. Finally, the honey is produced and ready to be poured into honey jars.

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honey: 7

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Task Response

The report provides a good summary of the main features of the honey production process, but some details are not accurately reported, such as the omission of step 2 and the incorrect description of step 1. The comparisons are minimal. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The report is generally easy to follow, but there are some minor issues with cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between steps. The paragraphing is not well-managed, with some sentences being too long and others too short.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is somewhat limited, with some inaccuracies, such as 'manufacturing' instead of 'producing', and 'individually built cells' instead of 'honeycomb cells'. There is some repetition of vocabulary, such as 'honeybees' and 'honey'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are some minor errors, such as subject-verb agreement issues and incorrect use of tenses. The sentence structure is simple and lacks variety.

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