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Band 5+: The diagram shows the percentage of phones sold by different countries from 2000 to 2010.

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The image shows a line graph titled 'Class practice' which diagrams the percentages of phones sold from 2000 to 2010. The specific data points for the five brands shown are: Iphone - 2000: 15%, 2003: 19%, 2007: 25%, 2010: 30%; Samsung - 2000: 10%, 2003: 13%, 2007: 24%, 2010: 25%; Huawei - 2000: 8%, 2003: 10%, 2007: 15%, 2010: 20%; Redmi - 2000: 30%, 2003: 25%, 2007: 20%, 2010: 10%; Artel - 2000: 5%, 2003: 4%, 2007: 6%, 2010: 5%.

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The given line chart illustrates the percentage of phones from different brands sold by different countries form 2000 to 2010.

Over all situation in the presented data shows an increase as well as decrease in the sale of different brands.

let’s begin with huawei phone the overall sale for this brand remains almost consistent from 2000 to 2010 that’s alomost 5%.However the percentage of redmi brand in 2000 is almost 7% and increasing slighty till 2003.After 2003 it rises uniformily from 10% to 20%. The sale of iphone increases uniformily in this time spam.The sale of samsung in 2000 to 2003 slightly rises from 2003 to 2007 is increases from 13% to almost 25% after 2007 the graph shows linear sale.Actel brand shows downfall in the given time spam from 30% to 10%.

In conclusion the sale of every brend is varying from 2000 to 2010 but the sale of iphone brand increases linearly

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main trends in the line graph, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks clarity. The description of individual brands is not always accurate, and the overall structure could be improved. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and organizing the information more logically, perhaps by grouping brands with similar trends together. Also, ensure that the overview captures the most significant trends across all brands.

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The report's organization could be improved. Consider grouping information by trends (e.g., increasing, decreasing) or by brand to enhance clarity. The 'overall' statement is vague and doesn't provide a clear overview. The flow between sentences and paragraphs needs improvement to ensure a smoother reading experience. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in addition,' 'similarly') more effectively to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed for a high score. There are instances of imprecise language (e.g., 'almost consistent,' 'slightly rises'). Use a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and changes more accurately. For example, instead of 'increases slightly,' consider 'experiences a marginal increase' or 'shows a modest upward trend.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures to express ideas more effectively. Pay close attention to proofreading to eliminate errors.

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