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Band 6+: The diagram shows the process of recycling rainwater. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a diagram titled 'Recycling Rainwater' showing a 5-step process: step 1 is 'rain falling on roof' where rainwater is collected; step 2 is 'water filtering'; step 3 is 'water storage'; step 4 is 'water treatment' where chemicals are added; and step 5 is the treated 'water for drinking' 'entering house' via a tap.

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The diagram below illustrates how rainwater are recycled.Overall, there are five man-made linear process,which start with rain falling on the roof and ending with the water entering house to make it drinkable.

Initially, the water comes from rain dropping on the roof,afterwards the water goes through a filtering process in order to remove any objects from the water as well as .Following that, the filterd water then stored in a water storage tank,where a substantial amount of water can be stored.Subsequently,as soon as the water appears in a storage tank, a pipe takes it to a water treatment plant ,where water is fully cleaned.Although some non detrimental chemicals are poured in the treatment plant to make sure that water do not contain any harm.

Moreover, when water is cleaned perfectly,it goes thorugh distribuition by many ways into the houses and makes it potable for residents to drink the water and stay hydrated.

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water: 13

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Task Response

The report covers the main stages of the rainwater recycling process and presents them in a logical sequence. The overview is clear, and the description of the steps is generally accurate. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses, such as not explicitly mentioning the final step of water entering the house via a tap, and a few grammatical and spelling errors (e.g., 'rainwater are recycled', 'filterd', 'thorugh', 'distribuition'). To improve, ensure all key stages are clearly described and proofread for accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure and follows the process in order, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The use of cohesive devices is sometimes awkward (e.g., 'as well as .' and 'Moreover,'). The report is presented as a single paragraph, which could be improved by splitting it into clear paragraphs for the overview and the detailed steps. The message is generally clear but not effortless to follow due to some abrupt transitions and incomplete sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good terms (e.g., 'filtering process', 'water storage tank', 'treatment plant', 'potable'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'water' is used repeatedly, 'filterd' is misspelled, 'distribuition' is misspelled, 'non detrimental' is awkward). The range of vocabulary is limited, and the phrasing is not always natural or sophisticated. To improve, use synonyms and more precise terms, and ensure correct spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'rainwater are recycled', 'water do not contain'), incorrect word forms (e.g., 'filterd', 'thorugh', 'distribuition'), and punctuation problems (e.g., missing spaces after commas, incomplete sentences). The range of grammatical structures is limited, and while some complex sentences are attempted, they are not always controlled. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for spelling and punctuation.

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